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Doorbell

Most Doorbells go ding-dong.
Oh that anoying thunderous ring.
Well My door bell is really ghetto.
Because it only does the Ding.
Oh how I wish mine played hark to the chimes.
Or just something from the vines.
My dad says he'll fix it, and just to wait.
But I know better and just to leave it in the hands of fate.
But not even fate can fix my bell,
so next time you'll see it, is in a Garage sale.
Well I guess I have to settle with my ghetto ring, but I know one thing a doorbell doesn't match your personality.

by Beckizzle454
posted on 01/23/2008

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Comment by BrokenN2: Jun 24, 2008 7:04 pm
lol
Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 23, 2008 8:39 am
very good!!!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 23, 2008 8:41 am
hahaha ok...that's interesting. nice poem.
Comment by Poison: Jan 23, 2008 9:06 am
Very interesting.
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 23, 2008 3:56 pm
im sorry about your doorbell...great poem btw Smiley
Comment by tiffany: Jan 23, 2008 4:21 pm
LMAO LMAO!!!!! OH MY FUCKEN GOD!!!!! THAT IS FUCKEN FUNNY!!!!! WAIT DOES IT REALLY DO THAT BECAUSE I NEVER PAY ATTENTION!!!!! OH MY GOD YOUR A KAREN!!!!


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Comment by craziibabii: Jan 23, 2008 9:19 pm
lol! i love the topic! it was genious! great poem silly! Sticking tongue out
Comment by craziibabii: Jan 23, 2008 9:19 pm
lol! i love the topic! it was genious! great poem silly! Sticking tongue out
Comment by heartopen: Jan 25, 2008 6:52 am
i really liked it
Comment by heartopen: Jan 25, 2008 6:52 am
fun to read
Comment by JennaJo: Jan 25, 2008 12:56 pm
Cute.
Comment by oceanreverie: Jan 25, 2008 5:38 pm
interesting. i think your ghetto doorbell sounds intriguing
Comment by OneManGang: Jan 27, 2008 11:31 am
Smiley
Comment by cryingblackblood: Jan 30, 2008 1:18 pm
haha i used to have a wicked ass doorbell it went ding dong ding ding dong Sticking tongue out
Comment by teardrops: Jan 30, 2008 8:43 pm
EVERY ONE THERE WILL BE A SECOND PART I WRITE!!!!! IT WILL BE UP SOON WHEN I GO TO HER HOUSE I WILL SEE HER LATER SO YEAH!!!!Becky is so kool with her getto bell. man i want to be like becky!!!!!
GOSH!!!!!!!
Comment by teardrops: Jan 30, 2008 8:45 pm
btw this is tiffany with a diffrent name
Comment by meltedsnowman: Jan 31, 2008 11:47 am
i like your ghetto bell.im jealous
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 7, 2008 8:05 am
I like it!!
Comment by Babyface: Feb 20, 2008 9:21 am
I like it......very good...
Comment by sorrowfulsoul: Feb 24, 2008 4:11 pm
Interesting, but funny. Smiley vote up!
Comment by LoveTheFreeWorld: Apr 10, 2008 6:32 pm
haha nice topic!
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