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Butterflies

Butterflies, Butterflies
Out in the open.
Or in disguise.
My brother likes them better.
He eats them with his fries.

by,
Chelsea Age, 14

by StarburstCrazy
posted on 09/26/2007

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Comment by sajinn: Sep 26, 2007 8:43 am
lol
Comment by tiffany716: Sep 26, 2007 3:22 pm
haha..this is really good..but its like funny at the same time..its awesome!..good job!
Comment by friendZdogZ: Sep 27, 2007 4:03 pm
no this is not funny, i'm sorry.
Comment by prncezz: Sep 28, 2007 9:54 am
ummm...yea...
Comment by StarburstCrazy: Sep 28, 2007 10:19 am
well seein how my cousin is only 3 she liked it and thtz all tht matters Sticking tongue out
Comment by Bourne: Sep 29, 2007 7:17 am
it's a great poem and really well don't if it was intended for a 3 year old. obviously those other people won't find it funny. nice work.
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Sep 30, 2007 1:03 pm
its kinda weird, but cool i guess read mine is odd too lol
Comment by StarburstCrazy: Oct 1, 2007 10:02 am
thnx lol Sticking tongue out
Comment by Snoman: Nov 2, 2007 5:54 pm
lol i can dig it Smiley
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Nov 19, 2007 11:17 am
I don't get why people comment on poems just to say they don't like them. Seriously, wtf?
Comment by Meggers: Mar 20, 2008 8:27 am
it was pretty good... keep working towards more poems...
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