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a dark scene

A scene of horror

It was a gory scene

She never stood a chance

Darkness all over the room

With black and red over her hands

She tried to stop but couldn’t resist

Until there was nothing left for her to do

So she lay their in a shroud of black and red

And her parents came home to this gory scene

Her mother screamed with horror and fright

As her dad yelled WTF why in the hell are you playing in red and black paint get that shit off my wall

by OneManGang
posted on 01/25/2008

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Comment by MysticFog: Jan 25, 2008 6:24 pm
haha wow...didnt expect the ending...but awesome.
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 25, 2008 9:17 pm
hahahaha nice love the twist at the end!
Comment by danielle: Jan 26, 2008 1:32 am
hahaha..awesome!
Comment by FlawsAndAll: Jan 26, 2008 1:09 pm
hahaha you soooo crazy I thought it was going to be a murder lol
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 27, 2008 4:30 pm
lol that's great! so you did turn it into a poem. this is great Sam.
Comment by bow16: Jan 28, 2008 7:59 am
LOL...thats nice...
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jan 28, 2008 2:31 pm
lol! omg! funny, unexpected!
Comment by cryingblackblood: Feb 6, 2008 10:25 am
HA HA HA
Comment by teardrops: Feb 7, 2008 6:52 pm
LMFAO for real!!!! i didn't expect that at the ending either. VOTE UP!!!!!!!!!
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 15, 2008 12:56 am
lol wtf the ending was so unexpected.. this poem is freakin amazing.. lol i love it.. i have to vote up for real.. lol can i print this off and give it to people.. i will say who wrote it.. well your screen name anyways.. wow i cant stop laughing and im not even high
Comment by OneManGang: Feb 16, 2008 2:23 pm
yea you can just put that i wrote it at the end
Comment by oceanreverie: Feb 17, 2008 9:08 pm
i love the unexpected ending!!! ahh that is perfect! great job!
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