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Will We Still Be Frends?
Will we be friends forever?
My sister once taught me that forever really means never.
Will we still be friends in high school?
Even if one of us becomes cool?
Will we still be friends when we are old?
And it's winter and we are freezing cold?
These are the things i wonder about.
Also the things that i doubt.
by truckergirl13
posted on 01/03/2008
My sister once taught me that forever really means never.
Will we still be friends in high school?
Even if one of us becomes cool?
Will we still be friends when we are old?
And it's winter and we are freezing cold?
These are the things i wonder about.
Also the things that i doubt.
by truckergirl13
posted on 01/03/2008
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Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 3, 2008 8:44 pm
I like this its a little to short tho i think you have a good thought and need to express it more. But keep up the good work. Love the idea.
Ps- You spelled friends wrong.
Comment by Bourne: Jan 3, 2008 9:52 pm
i don't know, if you make it any longer it kind of seems like your trying too hard. friendship should be easy, simple, not a lot of questions to it. i think you nailed it with this poem.Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 4, 2008 6:10 am
jazz this poem roxs!!Comment by Tequilla: Jan 7, 2008 12:32 pm
I like it...add a little bit more though...but other then that the thought behind it is good.Comment by truckergirl14: Mar 18, 2008 10:03 am
i feel the same way jazz hahahhaa
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Comment by BloodLustingElf: Apr 3, 2008 8:22 pm
it needs a little more, it kind of feels like you just left off in the middle of a thought when talking to me, but what you have is real good
you need to add a lot more to it.
beacause then when you say these are things i wonder about , it will be more effective