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Whats Up

Hey there!
Whats Up!

Always what we said to each other.
It seems nothing to bother.

She is very sweet
Lots of wit
At first she think Im a trash
But her impression crash
she found out
I need to be love
and love I return back.

She is very true
even it will cut my heart thru
She dont tell me good things
when she know it will do me bad things

Her Family, My Family
My Family, Her Family

Understanding what she always been
Caring,Loving what she always seen.

Words not enough
To describe what she was

One thing for sure
Love her too much for that is pure.

by altheamaraj
posted on 08/06/2008

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Comment by MindTwister: Aug 6, 2008 11:51 am
thats very very good your very talented voting up
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Aug 6, 2008 12:00 pm
nice
Comment by Pinoyak0: Aug 8, 2008 4:29 pm
aww thats cute
Comment by fetatoo89: Aug 22, 2008 5:14 am
awwww, that is so sweet!
Comment by altheamaraj: Aug 22, 2008 1:53 pm
thanks guys,,,i do miss her.
Comment by brokenhearts: Aug 26, 2008 6:42 pm
awwww, sooo sweet
Comment by Lesscroft: Aug 31, 2008 9:20 pm
is this meant to be a rap?
Comment by wyldegirl: Sep 10, 2008 8:43 pm
Thats really nice Smiley
Comment by altheamaraj: Sep 28, 2008 11:06 am
Lesscropt,
if thats how you read it dudes,,,
i try it myself and maybe you can do it...
thanks!!!
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