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Washed Away

I'm falling, sinking
way down deep
I'm lost, alone
and I can't sleep

like waves, I rip
and get sucked in
then crash, real hard
and then I spin

I'm lost alone
and it's my friends I lack
you saw me leave
but didn't help me back

my wall is up
and will not drop
the pain is strong
and will not stop

I cry, some tears
to void the pain
like rain, they fall
but I'm still insane

I drift, way out
and it's too late
I'm free, at last!
but it's not my fate...

by esportslover18
posted on 11/03/2009

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Comment by mybeloved: Nov 4, 2009 7:01 am
really nice.
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 3, 2009 2:57 pm
very sad poem, and I know what this feels like, I relate to it all to well, unfortunately.

"you saw me leave
but didn't help me back

my wall is up
and will not drop
the pain is strong
and will not stop"

I like these lines, sometimes we just need that person to help us back. sad poem, but good none the less.
Comment by NaturalBeauty: Nov 3, 2009 3:01 pm
that's really good and i truly know how you feel if you ever need somehow to talk to i'm here for ya
Comment by cupcake: Nov 5, 2009 3:53 pm
i love this and i can relate good jobb(:
Comment by Thatgirl2013: Nov 7, 2009 10:24 pm
this is wat i am going threw..and its an amazing poem.
Comment by missbb: Jan 24, 2010 1:02 pm
This is really good : o )
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