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Until the End

Take it
What you want
But much to my defense
You see
That i'm willing
Don't leave me in suspense

Don't take
The one here
I care about so much
They are
All i have
If even for a slight touch

I'm here
Right beside you
To be there through it all
You're near
So i can
Be strong for us both

The end
It will come
When we're good and ready
Until then
We'll be here
Waiting for IT to happen

by Wezmonkey
posted on 06/13/2007

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Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 13, 2007 9:30 am
=) i like it
Comment by nickson104: Jun 13, 2007 9:37 am
the second stanza doesnt lack... i just cant understand Smiley im not in the right frame of mind to be reading poetry at moment lolz Smiley like the poem its really good
Comment by Wezmonkey: Jun 13, 2007 9:40 am
Well i thought it lacked... but then again... who am i to judge myself when i dont even judge other people...
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 13, 2007 9:40 am
I understand the poem and the emotions and its really good. I would like to know what the poem is written about though. what is "IT"
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 13, 2007 9:44 am
^^ that sounds very unhappy wesly with a "t" ^^ SMILE NOW OR ELSE
Comment by thefadingscene: Jun 13, 2007 9:49 am
Wow. This has such strong emotion in it.
you are a gifted writer =]
The second stanza is quite amazing, if you ask me.
Comment by Kitten: Jun 13, 2007 9:49 am
yeah, what is "IT" ... sounds a little dirty to me
Comment by Wezmonkey: Jun 13, 2007 9:52 am
"IT" is not meant to be dirty... but take it how you like
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 13, 2007 9:55 am
people are dumb. to take that dirty. like, people always take everything the wrong way, and it is just another sign of howwwwwwww idiotic this country is turning. rawr.
Comment by Wezmonkey: Jun 13, 2007 9:58 am
HEY!! People can take it how thy want... and if you think about it that way... this poem can be pretty dirty...
Comment by moonlightmage: Jun 13, 2007 10:48 am
Lmao, you guys! stop discussing the potential perverted nature of wes's perfect poetry or I shall poke thee!!!
Lol I <3 you guys! Great poem wes, I think someday you need to give an explanation =P
^.^ turnips ^.~

Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 13, 2007 2:46 pm
well. now that i "think about it" i'm pretty hippocritical (and i cant spell) because. well. come to our latin class LMAO.
oooh.turnips!
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 13, 2007 4:19 pm
haha katie! <3
*slowness much*
k. maybe i should stop posting endless comments on this poem lollll
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Jun 15, 2007 5:30 am
JESSI YOU HIPPO!!! lmao...but seriously...funny Katie...TURNIPS...OOOHHH, TURNIPS...
Comment by Kitten: Jun 22, 2007 4:37 am
WOOOOOW wtf you guys Sticking tongue out
Comment by unknown: Sep 25, 2007 11:04 am
lmao!!!
Comment by NightmareKnightAbsynthe: Jan 27, 2008 4:13 pm
It, it it it, well, that can be mistaken for many different things now cant it?
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Oct 10, 2008 5:54 am
Ohgosh...first, Erik, I think that's what above comments meant. Second, I shouldn't've reread this...now I actually get the possible dirtiness which I didn't get before...*shakes head* you people have corrupted me...
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