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Souls Reborn

our voices joined in song
the day my soul met you
flames of hate extinguished
my heart born again new

Our day of celebration
The kindred souls of two
The day you came into my life
And made my wish come true

the knife lies on the table
its cutting now is through
lifes pieces taste as sweet as cake
cos I share this day with you

The flames dance in your eyes
The glow brightens my world
How could I ask for anything else
Than to share this with you girl

in a million coloured spheres
our hopes and dreams drift to the sky
I smile as they float off together
happy we stand side by side

A gift of hope we give each other
A promise to always be true
You splash my world with color
That had faded before I met you

the sun it sinks into the west
as this day comes to an end
but tonight in my thoughts you will remain
my beautiful, special friend

This day comes but once a year
You make every day brand new
I slip off with a feeling so warm
Wishing all your dreams come true

by Brandon
posted on 11/03/2008

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Comment by Selene: Nov 3, 2008 1:14 pm
I'll never get tired of writing with you. thank you. cuddles.
Comment by jordan24: Nov 3, 2008 1:24 pm
Really good guys. It's beautiful! It makes me happier just reading it, knowing that some peoples live arn't as depressing as mine. I love all your poems, keep writing!! <3
Comment by gabriella: Nov 3, 2008 8:56 pm
Excellent work. I love all of your work.Great pairing.
Comment by angeliclove: Nov 3, 2008 10:12 pm
I am a big fan of your work. This is such a beautiful poem.
Great work you two.
Comment by cutiepie: Nov 5, 2008 9:14 am
great work u too, u guys just keep gettin better and better, keep up the good work
Comment by iampoetry: Nov 6, 2008 5:23 am
i like this one -new to this whole gig, but out of the one's i've seen, one of the best
Comment by UnsafeSanctuary: Nov 6, 2008 11:08 am
Grand job the both of you, it's wonderful
Comment by Finch: Nov 6, 2008 11:15 am
That is awesome!
Comment by tommy: Nov 6, 2008 12:37 pm
Nice.. I wish I could write like that.
great poem.
Comment by GeorgeWilliams: Nov 6, 2008 3:47 pm
great poem
Comment by magikalone69: Nov 7, 2008 7:44 pm
This Was A really Good poem. I Loved reading très beaucoup!
Comment by XxXBleedingRosexXx: Nov 8, 2008 4:15 pm
Really good. Prefectly, PERFECTLY, writtenOpen smile
Comment by kunwoosong: Nov 8, 2008 7:46 pm
OH~~~~
Comment by lovepoetry1882: Nov 8, 2008 11:01 pm
its really good. i liked it
Comment by AdamStewart25: Nov 10, 2008 9:41 am
cool
Comment by gothinlove: Nov 10, 2008 6:21 pm
Great work,,it is wonderfully written
Comment by cowboylover: Nov 11, 2008 10:23 am
Beautiful, Truly Beautiful! Smiley
Comment by itsreallymesalads: Nov 16, 2008 2:22 pm
you two are such good writers i love all ur work, if u eva publish this stuff i wud definatley buy it
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 22, 2008 7:13 pm
you guys make a great team!! absolutely beautiful.
Comment by dar: Dec 4, 2008 9:12 am
WOW! your poem . .
it's like really really good!!
GOOD JOB!!
Comment by Ashchildofdeath: Dec 8, 2008 2:58 pm
you guys are amazing. i love your poems. <3 keep it up Smiley
Comment by lonelygal: Dec 12, 2008 6:22 pm
I think u 2 will make a great couple. Keep up the good work.
Comment by shehatesme: Jan 12, 2009 11:04 am
whoa alot on this one goodjob vote up
Comment by Cxhanelle: Feb 10, 2009 10:51 pm
That was really good.
Definetly gives insight into
the soul ;)
Comment by Prudence: Feb 15, 2009 4:20 pm
pretty cool Smiley
Comment by LittleDareDevil: Feb 25, 2009 2:36 pm
Awwwhhhh! That is so cool and sweet and that is very touching. It's really good! I love it! Keep on writing.
Comment by FRANKDARK: Mar 12, 2009 4:01 pm
AWWWW
Comment by MrsPerez: May 7, 2009 8:48 am
Nice, I write with a friend from school. We like to express feelings in our poems.
Comment by somethingisaid: Sep 2, 2009 5:58 pm
beautiful poem! definetly felt the emotion and it flows so nicely =D
Comment by satif009: Jul 1, 2009 10:31 am
i just love the title ''souls reborn''
Comment by NoFlogging: Jul 2, 2009 6:30 pm
Truly great
Comment by sion: Sep 13, 2009 3:14 am
great
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:32 am
coolio
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