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Never Again

Life story on her arms
Tears dammed in her eyes
Her lips afraid to speak
Afraid to let me inside
So I wait

Texts me HEY at 3 am
Sit on her porch til dawn
Hides as he drives away
The problem is gone
So I go

Packs her bags one night
Soft knocks on the door
Tears flooding her face
Eyes fixed on the floor
So I hold

Sits still on the couch
My hand on her arm
Each scar has a story
She shares them all
So I listen

The walls all disappear
Few bricks just in case
Tall when she walks
A smile on her face
So I smile

by Brandon
posted on 09/14/2008

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Comment by josef: Oct 2, 2008 5:27 am
Good poem. Inspirational in a sense,
Comment by Mangekyo: Sep 27, 2008 10:55 am
very beautiful poem....indeed a poem to love as well as ponder the mysterious occasions but indeed i will not ask
Comment by Cris: Nov 30, 2008 7:46 pm
love this poem it is real good.
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jan 11, 2009 4:10 am
i love it!! =) amazing
Comment by JaredPavlicek: Nov 23, 2008 9:15 pm
great poem keep writing
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Sep 14, 2008 10:13 pm
why does this have not even one comment! i think it's one of the best ive read today...REALLY GOOD love it!!
Comment by DrLaffin: Sep 14, 2008 10:42 pm
very cool
Comment by cocoaluver14: Sep 15, 2008 12:59 am
a great poem it really hits me
Comment by gabriella: Sep 15, 2008 8:43 am
Great poem. very very good. I can relate
Comment by crystina8503: Sep 15, 2008 9:58 am
Awesome poem... I love the way you put this together. Good job!!
Comment by Holychild: Sep 15, 2008 11:38 am
keep up the good work brandon!!
God bless you and know that Jesus is by your side.
Love&PeaceSmiley
Comment by missingmom: Sep 15, 2008 1:10 pm
No one can see my scars, but I too will be walking tall again very soon, great poem! Smiley
Comment by darkangel111: Sep 15, 2008 1:56 pm
it's really a great poem. u are a true friend.
Comment by asdfyz: Sep 15, 2008 6:40 pm
hmmm very true. This sounds very similar to a girl i know. I like this one very much. It is real and true and i like it.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 15, 2008 10:06 pm
This is such a sweet poem. I wish you and your friend the best. Great job.
Comment by angeliclove: Sep 16, 2008 7:47 am
Very good work. I hope all girls that have a problem like that can make it through and find happiness.
Comment by cutiepie: Dec 24, 2008 2:52 pm
wow like all your other poems
i'm speechless
good job
Comment by Sarahsmile: Sep 16, 2008 1:16 pm
This is such a great poem
Comment by loveme77: Sep 16, 2008 3:52 pm
Wow! This is SO amazing! *I know you're probably tired of hearing that by now* But no matter how many times it is said, it never stops being true.
I congratulate you. This is terrific!
Comment by loveme77: Sep 16, 2008 3:52 pm
Wow! This is SO amazing! *I know you're probably tired of hearing that by now* But no matter how many times it is said, it never stops being true.
I congratulate you. This is terrific!
Comment by Selene: Sep 17, 2008 6:23 am
This is beautiful. I love the end. It says there is still hope. thank you for sharing this.
Comment by FreeFalling: Sep 17, 2008 3:24 pm
I love this, you did a really great job on it. Keep writing.
Comment by EAStanley: Sep 17, 2008 3:25 pm

That is really good. I am glad that you could write it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment by Atwood: Sep 17, 2008 4:54 pm
rawr
Comment by darklove: Sep 18, 2008 1:32 pm
Great poem. very inspirational
Comment by littleford94: Sep 19, 2008 2:50 am
Lovely poem...
Comment by burningheart: Sep 19, 2008 2:21 pm
Excellent...keep up the good work
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: Sep 19, 2008 6:50 pm
already said... but it's really good (:
Comment by darkangel122: Sep 20, 2008 8:55 am
wow i love it very good....
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Sep 20, 2008 4:29 pm
i like this one very much,how kind you must be.
Comment by xXUndeadPrincessXx: Sep 21, 2008 8:54 am
So sad a story alot of ppl share awesome
Comment by Kookie3104: Sep 21, 2008 11:01 am
this is really great!!!
Comment by katwoman124w: Sep 21, 2008 11:19 am
Sounds like she is really luckly to have an awesome friend like you.Sometimes all it takes to give you strength is someone just to listen.God bless you both.
Comment by tuffluve13: Sep 21, 2008 9:49 pm
love it
Comment by tiptonlauren: Sep 22, 2008 3:11 am
Brill
Comment by southerncomfort: Sep 22, 2008 7:17 pm
Beautiful poem.... I love it
Comment by hollygirl: Sep 23, 2008 9:28 pm
Very good... This is a great piece. keep up the good work
Comment by tearsofpain: Sep 25, 2008 3:54 pm
simply wonderful
Comment by blackheart: Sep 25, 2008 4:06 pm
I really like this one. It is great
Comment by masterpoetywriter: Sep 27, 2008 7:29 pm
wow man this is great
Comment by echodelta112: Sep 27, 2008 7:43 pm
awesome! great poem
Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Sep 27, 2008 9:08 pm
wow...beautful..and its deep..youre friend is lucky to have you..
i really like this poem.
wait, no..i love it.
:]
Comment by chobit99: Sep 28, 2008 7:56 pm
= O
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l
Comment by mytragedy: Sep 29, 2008 10:33 pm
omg..this is beautiful. There is always hope.
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Sep 30, 2008 9:15 am
great poem i loooove it
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 1, 2008 2:55 pm
love it
Comment by darkprincess: Oct 1, 2008 8:08 pm
I love it.. I can relate so well with this poem
Comment by Lonelygirl: Oct 2, 2008 9:32 pm
Great poem... You are very good
Comment by crystalball: Oct 3, 2008 6:44 am
OMG great poem I LOVE it
Comment by Villager: Oct 3, 2008 8:09 am
Brilliant
Comment by sanssoul: Oct 3, 2008 8:10 pm
OMG---I love it....
Comment by heartlesslover: Oct 6, 2008 4:14 pm
Incredible ...this poem is awesome. I love it
Comment by lostangel: Oct 8, 2008 7:05 am
So inspiring, I love this so much
Comment by estonianbracelet: Oct 11, 2008 2:37 am
Wow. This just so.. eh
Comment by jacobc: Oct 12, 2008 4:52 pm
Brilliant
Comment by jacobc: Oct 12, 2008 4:52 pm
Love the ending too
Comment by WritersBlock: Oct 13, 2008 8:10 pm
Very pretty. Very nice. Left me wondering all the details..good technique.
Comment by fetatoo89: Oct 14, 2008 11:15 pm
This is such a great poem! well done really!
Comment by poetmeme: Oct 15, 2008 2:31 am
This is a really god poem. I practically was in tears!
Comment by team3d: Oct 15, 2008 8:31 am
^^^^^ "God poem?" I think you mean good mother tuging poem because thats exactly what it is.
Comment by Breannalove: Oct 17, 2008 8:22 am
Simply the best...Great work
vote up
Comment by Angelofdeath1223: Oct 18, 2008 12:32 pm
good poem I love it very sad but a good kind of sad
Comment by SmilingTragedy: Oct 18, 2008 1:49 pm
wow.. i'd love for some one to listen to my stories. instead of just looking at me as if im un-normal. i just have different ways of handling problems. which is understood by some. but i love this. it explains so many ways i feel. thanks for the compliment on mine.
Comment by TearsofAcid: Oct 19, 2008 8:18 pm
I love your work. This is a terrific piece.
Comment by lostnlove: Jan 13, 2009 7:01 am
very beautiful piece of work
Comment by nakeeda: Oct 25, 2008 11:05 pm
great job.. you are a true friend.. having been in that sort of situation i can totaly relate.. some times its the last person you can think of that would understand you
Comment by trilogy: Oct 26, 2008 7:57 pm
Very good..it shows so much caring.. This poem can be related to by many
Comment by Jakoby: Oct 27, 2008 9:17 pm
good work
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 31, 2008 12:42 pm
A simply beautiful and amazing poem.
Comment by watever76: Nov 1, 2008 11:22 pm
amazing...thts all i can say
Comment by ArcAngel: Nov 6, 2008 9:34 am
good poem
i really like it
Comment by SHAWNSBUTTERCUP4E4L: Nov 7, 2008 2:10 am
love the poem a lot
Comment by FadingAway: Nov 7, 2008 5:22 pm
I love this. =]
Comment by itsreallymesalads: Nov 16, 2008 2:23 pm
aww thats sweet and well written, quite true aswell bout the fact that most people build a wall
Comment by brokenheartedarmysister: Nov 17, 2008 7:18 am
Amazing poem
Comment by Spanishgal94: Nov 17, 2008 7:24 pm
amazing poem. the ending is happy though and it is always nice to have someone to wait until they are ready to talk
Comment by magikalone69: Nov 19, 2008 8:09 am
Great poem. I loved it
Comment by ArcAngel: Nov 19, 2008 4:20 pm
Very Good. Smiley
Comment by moonlighto3: Aug 4, 2009 3:58 am
nice poem.AWESOME
Comment by amyjohnson: Nov 26, 2008 5:37 am
nice Smiley
Comment by angelheart16: Dec 3, 2008 8:08 pm
yeah i agree with selene, it still brings hope, its very inspirational, ur agreat and talented writer brandon SmileySmileySmiley
Comment by Arlhen: Dec 6, 2008 1:10 am
i love it
Comment by Arlhen: Dec 6, 2008 1:10 am
good job
Comment by XxsidniestarxX: Dec 6, 2008 8:34 am
You a have a great talent for writing poems...
and i hope that you keep it up...
Comment by amigas4life: Dec 8, 2008 3:49 pm
awesome poem!!
Comment by JamieJohnson: Dec 12, 2008 8:33 pm
omg this is amazing
i hope it is not real
that would be so sad but cool
omg awesome
Comment by JamieJohnson: Dec 12, 2008 8:34 pm
Smiley)
Comment by lonelygal: Dec 14, 2008 2:41 pm
i like it
Comment by Villager: Dec 17, 2008 10:26 pm
it is an inspiration to those in the same situation..keep writing
Comment by Minah13: Dec 21, 2008 6:01 pm
wonderful poem it was amazingSmiley
Comment by angellostindarkness: Dec 27, 2008 4:56 am
this is such an amazing poem. filled with hurt and caring and makes one think. good job.
Comment by RedStone: Dec 29, 2008 3:59 am
such talent
Comment by poetrylove017: Jan 18, 2009 9:59 pm
Awww. This is a great poem. It all makes sense. Vote up! =]
Comment by livelife: Jan 1, 2009 6:26 pm
very good job..
Comment by LightestShadow: Jan 3, 2009 4:48 pm
gorgeus and so discriptive, i love it, its a beautiful poem, i voted up for u!
Comment by HEATHER0511: Jan 3, 2009 8:55 pm
NICE POEM.SO MAY PEOPLE CAN RELATE.
Comment by bbplayer2011: Jan 12, 2009 12:36 pm
This poem was great. Only a true friend will listen to another persons thoughts.
Comment by chelseaatpeace: Jan 12, 2009 8:06 pm
wow i had a friend like that the way you made the words come out like that was amazing
Comment by lostnlove: Jan 13, 2009 10:26 am
great poem
such beautiful words
Comment by cwslaw: Mar 10, 2009 5:25 am
wow
Comment by twilightpoet: Jan 25, 2009 3:29 pm
that is 100%
pure beautiful
Comment by nothingisimpossible: Jan 28, 2009 10:50 am
Beautiful poem!!!I liked itSmileySmiley
Comment by crystal1234: Feb 2, 2009 12:11 pm
AWSOME
Comment by angeloflove: Feb 4, 2009 11:27 am
I love your poem!!! it`s sweet!
Comment by kendaray: Feb 8, 2009 12:42 pm
Beautiful ;)
Comment by kendaray: Feb 8, 2009 12:42 pm
Smiley
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Feb 10, 2009 9:45 pm
Fkn LOVED IT. such a good persons perspective.
Comment by ForgottenMemory: Feb 11, 2009 5:43 pm
this is an amazing poem, and there's a lot of comments too!!
Comment by WriterandReader: Feb 17, 2009 3:12 pm
Wow! I have a friend who is there for me the way you are for her, she needs you, Kudos this one gave me chills.
Comment by Lechray: Feb 18, 2009 7:13 am
wow this is great i know how hard it is when people won't let you help but it's great that she had a friend like you around
Comment by Lifeless: Feb 18, 2009 3:45 pm
This is a really great poem
Comment by freakofthenight: Mar 3, 2009 4:14 pm
good job!
Comment by deep: Mar 4, 2009 12:49 am

good job dear
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Mar 4, 2009 3:51 pm
Amazing poem.
Simply beautiful.
Comment by Sweetblood: Mar 5, 2009 8:53 pm
Amazingly well writen.
Comment by greenleaf: Mar 11, 2009 9:41 am
ow thats sad
Comment by bubbles13: Mar 13, 2009 5:57 pm
do you act like that to your friends?
if so you are a really nice friend
Comment by Drew618: Mar 20, 2009 4:22 pm
That was really awesome. I suggest you to keep writing. I totally love it. ;D
Comment by Samie: Mar 27, 2009 1:32 am
It seems to have a hiden meaning but also a meaning that is so strong it can not be missed.
Comment by JamesR: Sep 1, 2009 7:29 am
"So I smile" No greater reward. Great poem Smiley
Comment by JamesR: Sep 1, 2009 7:29 am
"So I smile" No greater reward. Great poem Smiley
Comment by SilentBeauty: Mar 27, 2009 12:11 pm
I love this poem, it reminds me of when my dad beat my family i love it
Comment by 11YoungWriter20: Mar 28, 2009 10:04 am
THIS POEM IS GREAT U HAVE GREAT WRITING SKILLS SO CONTINUE 2 DO SO!!
Comment by SexyLove: Mar 29, 2009 3:09 pm
OMG this is a great poem i love it!!! =)
Comment by justmeonlyme: Apr 11, 2009 6:17 am
it was a wonderful poem
Comment by MarkJ: Apr 5, 2009 8:35 pm
That was great! I loved it.
Comment by cyndel: Apr 15, 2009 8:30 am
great poem Smiley
Comment by gappish: Apr 15, 2009 10:23 am
Good job. You have a lot of comments that are all positive. Spoken from the heart and true. Nice! Smiley I like writing were people aren't afraid of their emotions.
Comment by Writeitout: Apr 15, 2009 8:28 pm
Your poems are always REALLY good... like your others I love this one... I am a fan.
Comment by LayalS: Apr 17, 2009 4:01 am
I just love it
beautiful ..keep up the good work nd stay by ur friends side
Comment by LilyFrejahX: Apr 18, 2009 6:20 am
touchingg i love it got great feeling to it... Nice! =)
Comment by ForsakenNight: Apr 18, 2009 9:19 am
Wow I loved it that was great so good and true.
Comment by SilentBeauty: Apr 21, 2009 12:40 pm
Awwwww i love it this is very sweet i know many people who have been abused this is a great poem
Comment by SilentBeauty: Apr 21, 2009 12:41 pm
Awwwww i love it this is very sweet i know many people who have been abused this is a great poem
Comment by Deadmemories: Apr 21, 2009 12:54 pm
:'( luv it, you must keep writing
Comment by nana2195: Apr 21, 2009 6:00 pm
this poem is good and inspirational. i love it
Comment by ShaunaSharice: Apr 21, 2009 7:07 pm
Lovely !!!...I bet ur a good friend !!!
Comment by brokenhearted08: May 5, 2009 5:23 am
awww oh wow thats really good
Comment by khaleel: May 6, 2009 10:47 am
really gooood
Comment by MrsPerez: May 7, 2009 8:17 am
I love this! It's really a good poem
Comment by Chall: May 14, 2009 8:35 am
looks like your pretty popularSmiley good poem
Comment by ashelly: May 14, 2009 7:58 pm
this is sad but take that d word out please how old are you
Comment by secretskeptinside: May 24, 2009 3:16 am
this person is very lucky to have u in their life. Great poem, truly inspirational.
Comment by toria13: Jun 1, 2009 7:39 am
wow thas veryy gewd i really enjoyed it! your an awsum writer!Smiley
Comment by Duckie: Jun 1, 2009 7:07 pm
wow! that's really sad! but your amazing at writing poems
Comment by christinababe903: Jun 6, 2009 7:07 pm
i loved it <3
Comment by dietpepsi: Jun 19, 2009 9:53 pm
seriously amazing
Comment by wounderfulmotherandwife: Jul 21, 2009 9:30 am
It is very good and i like
Comment by Spitfire98: Aug 7, 2009 4:16 pm
Abuse is all too common in this world. Atleast this one has a happy ending
Comment by NixNi: Jul 24, 2009 11:34 pm
awesome poem... one of the best i've ever read
Comment by heartbreakbny: Jul 29, 2009 4:55 am
great poem!
Comment by paxson00: Aug 7, 2009 10:00 am
that must have taken a long time to write. great work!
Comment by azeezoluwa: Aug 11, 2009 4:48 pm
I like it
Comment by sion: Sep 12, 2009 9:00 am
simply great
Comment by NeverAReason: Sep 23, 2009 6:58 am
amazing Smiley
Comment by DanielJacquesCain: Sep 24, 2009 3:11 pm
Yes!
Comment by courtneytland: Oct 2, 2009 7:28 am
this is my favorite poem of urs keep up the good work
Comment by Ariel24: Oct 5, 2009 2:43 pm
wow keep up the good work this is amazing
Comment by charlotte897: Nov 8, 2009 4:57 am
wow i like your poem ...i have done that to myself and i regret it i have scars on my arms legs and tummy -.-_ but my engkish teacher noticed and she talked to me ily ms allan you saved me from mself though i dont think i would really be able to tell the story of each scar for all the reasons i was doing it for were lost somewhere yet i kept bleeding until ms allan noticed me
Comment by ellipsis: Oct 21, 2009 9:00 pm
BEAUTIFUL ENDING.
Comment by stainedwithblood: Oct 25, 2009 3:11 pm
awww.
Comment by Leeshio: Oct 27, 2009 4:14 pm
cool
Comment by AndThePointIs: Oct 28, 2009 5:53 pm
amazing (:
Comment by gene: Nov 2, 2009 10:30 am
interesting...
Comment by poetictragedy93: Nov 3, 2009 3:26 pm
really good Smiley keep it up
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:40 am
I'm so glad that it's stopped. Nobody deserves to live when they do stuff like that
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