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My Moonlight Messengers

Messengers disguised as moonlight,
Dance along the midnight air,
Carrying notes of love and compassion,
Entangled in my golden hair.

They're all rugged up to keep out the snow,
Smiling melodically at the flowers,
With their vibrant hats and scarves,
Swirling around for hours and hours.

Every night a different dance,
A different set of steps,
Their waltz a pattern of soft spoken skips,
At which they are so adept.

Music flowing through the stars,
Lighting up their darkened faces,
Floating up the garden stairs,
Enclosing upon my secret places.

Blown to the depths of the back yard,
Drifting past the weeping willow,
Creeping silently over the cat,
Rest sleepily upon my pillow.

Intertwining between my fingers,
Napping upon my eyelashes,
Dawn is here, and I say goodbye,
They disappear as first light flashes.

Tears fall so needlessly,
They will be back, I know,
Soaring through my gardens,
Sobbing when it's time to go.

by BreeBree
posted on 10/21/2009

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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 21, 2009 2:26 am
*shivers* I don't know why but this gave me chills! It displayed such a Radiant image in my mind-all of it! You always do so well and never seize to impress me! Wonderful Poem, I like it a lot! :]
Comment by SoLittleTime: Oct 21, 2009 10:18 pm
this is great, both in idea and execution.

and flippinthrulife17 might want to note that the word is "cease"
you cannot "seize" to impress someone.
think about the word "seizure" for a second.
to seize is to cramp up and be unable to move in a controlled fashion.
Comment by danielle: Oct 23, 2009 9:13 am
wow.. this is great.. it's like a beautiful fairy tale in a way.. really magical..
Comment by voices: Oct 25, 2009 5:04 pm
awesome
Comment by DaniDarlz: Oct 26, 2009 11:15 pm
wow bree this is really good. nice rhymes by the way. its got a great mental image with it... lol maybe thats just me.
ily
Comment by gene: Nov 2, 2009 10:31 am
cool
Comment by ltfchannah: Nov 11, 2009 3:19 am
i love it
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