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my lines short but deep,
like a knife wound we'll make you bleed,
because that's how we role down a hill,
say fuck all and we aim to kill,
because we've got each others backs,
we protect one an others ball sacks,
there's no shit that we will teck,
touch us we'll break your neck,
we've stepped in so much shit,
we have took too much stick,
It makes me sick, It goes to my head,
we say things we should never have said.

So do what you want we'll keep stone faces,
we'll laugh even if society hates us,
so remove the kak,
cut us some slack,
leave us outcasts it will have to do,
I'd rather slit my throat than be with you!

If the spellings are wrong its because that's how we pronounce it and makes you understand how it rhymes

Inspired by: teardrops

by MindTwister
posted on 04/18/2008

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Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Apr 19, 2008 7:57 am
wow...i dont know what to say i really like the rhyming i think is really dark and emo but well written Smiley
Comment by MindTwister: Apr 19, 2008 1:40 pm
I'm not an emo i just take thing past the line when it come to my enemies and my friends lol, I'm a chav believe it or not.
Comment by hotchick: Apr 19, 2008 6:38 pm
pretty good. Sticking tongue out
Comment by oceanreverie: Jun 26, 2008 8:49 pm
this is well written.

i especially love the lines

"So do what you want we'll keep stone faces,
we'll laugh even if society hates us,
so remove the kak,
cut us some slack,
leave us outcasts it will have to do,
I'd rather slit my throat than be with you!"

very powerful. well written!
Comment by MindTwister: Aug 7, 2008 2:06 am
thanks Smiley
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