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Loyalty

I have friends as loyal as can be,
They are the ones who always save me,
When I'm losing my temper and I start to swing my fist,
They will calm me down and I thank my friends for this,
If I'm in trouble and I scream and shout,
My friends are the ones that help me out,
But I also have their back too,
Breath down their necks and I'll be after you,
My friends are something I will always need,
Without these people my heart would bleed.

Inspired by: teardrops

by MindTwister
posted on 01/30/2008

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Comments: 12
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Comment by teardrops: Jan 30, 2008 4:10 pm
awww thanks.....And i like the poem alot. thats how me and my friends role.......down a hill....lol jk but i have my friends backs and they got mine.
but if anything try not to fight. VOTE UP!!!
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 30, 2008 4:17 pm
lol thanks
Comment by DarkDevotions: Jan 30, 2008 8:41 pm
I really like this one. I can relate too it so much. Without my friends, I probably wouldn't be here anymore. Great poem....good job! Keep it up!!

Forevermore,
Dark Devotions
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 31, 2008 4:56 am
Thanks Smiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 31, 2008 10:32 am
great poem
Comment by Penny: Jan 31, 2008 8:52 pm
hey thats totally awesome! i feel the same about my friends as well Smiley
Comment by MindTwister: Feb 1, 2008 6:55 am
Thanks
Comment by darksideofme: Feb 1, 2008 6:28 pm
I loved the rhymes in this one. Wow this is a great poem. I think Im going to go and call all of my freinds right now

Nevermore,
dark side of me
Comment by MindTwister: Feb 2, 2008 5:19 am
thanks Open smile
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 5, 2008 10:44 am
neat! i agree with with darksideofme.
Comment by MindTwister: Feb 8, 2008 4:19 pm
ty
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Feb 13, 2008 6:03 pm
LOVE ITSmiley
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