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Insecure

look in the mirror
who do you see?
Do you see the person you're trying to be?

OR do you see the person-
who sees the person you're trying to be?

when was the last time
you saw yourself?

i know it's hard
because your make up is so thick

YOU HIDE YOURSELF WITH LIES!
you pick up your head
and fake a smile
i know you haven't been happy for a while

AND YOU HAVENT BECOME THAT PERSON!

the only thing that you've become is

weak

and even more
insecure

and if you haven't seen it yet
with all the help i've given you

then you're hopeless

and i dont want to talk to it-
to the imposter you've become.

FIND ME WHEN YOU FIND YOURSELF!

by truckergirl13
posted on 03/17/2008

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Comment by luv2party: Mar 17, 2008 5:03 pm
wow ur a good poet nice poem ladooie =]
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 17, 2008 5:21 pm
aww.. that's a really good poem!! i <3 it!! keep writing Smiley
Comment by SadMadness: Mar 18, 2008 11:05 am
Aw i like this..
its like reading about me and my best friend :S .
Keep writing, u are really good Smiley
Comment by TrulySincere90: Mar 18, 2008 3:02 pm
Wow. This is so truthful.
Comment by TrulySincere90: Mar 18, 2008 3:02 pm
Wow. This is so truthful.
Comment by Meggers: Mar 19, 2008 4:39 pm
OMG! that is like... toataly my life! u know me so well jazz! lol
Comment by MemorableBabe13: Mar 20, 2008 7:51 pm
I love this! It seems like you were trying to explain something, yet you didnt want people to know exactly what it was. I love this poem!
Comment by poemsarebliss: Mar 25, 2008 8:48 am
wow..it's very good!!..and i totally agree wid the person above..!!
Comment by crafthall: Mar 29, 2008 7:39 am
Love the poem, I know so many people it would apply to!
Comment by truckergirl14: Apr 3, 2008 11:27 am
this is great awesome job Smiley Smiley
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Comment by BloodLustingElf: Apr 3, 2008 8:17 pm
Very good... i like it alot
Comment by dakotadarcy: Apr 8, 2008 1:58 pm
Thats excellent, kind of explains me to be honest! Really good! xx
Comment by Rouge: Apr 17, 2008 1:09 pm
awesome ^^
Comment by xxstabmybackxx: Apr 25, 2008 11:06 pm
wow....explains whats goin on with me and my friend....i miss her...
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