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Friend Crimes

You talk and you flirt and get along in the dirt. You roll through the years fueled from catch phrases and tears with tart tough love with no real conversations. And when it comes for you companion's alienation, you cease to entertain feelings of attachment. Become apathetic and launch detachment. You're ephemeral smile shows it's true colors. It shakes and wavers under your fake cover. You were never their friend. You were their acquaintance, you flirted with patience. You pretended to be there and heard what they wanted you to hear. Lied on a regular basis and kept switching your faces out and in from where it began. You are one of many who have unknowingly formed a clan.

by Verasailles
posted on 04/20/2008

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Comment by micahdavidcrump: Apr 24, 2008 9:27 am
You painted a vivid picture. i really like this part, "You're ephemeral smile shows it's true colors. It shakes and wavers under your fake cover." Sometimes its such a fake smile its almost a smirk
Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 24, 2008 5:58 am
deep man. deeheeheeeeeep.
Comment by Holychild: Apr 22, 2008 1:39 pm
thats deep man. it comes from the soul. God bless you.
Love&Peace:]
Comment by nickson104: Apr 23, 2008 3:27 pm
wow, man thats seriously deep, really. i mean WOW, its definitely worth adding you to my network, a vote up and me to look at your others definitely... and to think i came on here really just to pay you back for commenting on my poem
Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 24, 2008 5:54 am
umyes.
Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 24, 2008 5:56 am
seriously though. this is perfect.
not only is it amazingly written. but it is soooo true and portrayed so well. (now lets just hope it never gets to this point with me...)
haha owait. never mind. it has.
Comment by Monika1: Apr 25, 2008 5:58 am
Perfect
Comment by asdfyz: Apr 28, 2008 9:05 am
that is very deep. Kinda sad but not really. I enjoys it
Comment by Bleedingcactus: May 1, 2008 4:14 pm
You'll find lots of people are like this. Fake friends I call them. As long as the attention is given to them they are happy. Very selfish people. You deserve more! Nicely written!
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