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Dear Friend, Old Friend...

What has been bothering you
Dear friend?
Old friend?
Do you only need me to
Lend you
A hand?

I will do all that I can
For you
Kind friend.
Please just help me understand!
What's wrong?
Oh, friend...

Am I what's making you so
Distant?
Sad friend!
If you just want me to go,
I will,
Poor friend.

Sorry I must seem to be
Obsessed
My friend.
I had just thought you would see
Good friend...
Great friend.

Nobody will understand
Me now...
Gone, friend.
For I am alone in this land...
True friend...
Past friend...

What has been bothering you?
Dear friend...
Old friend...
Sorry I was not able to
Lend you
A hand...

by XimTheLost
posted on 01/09/2009

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Comment by Haylo: Jan 9, 2009 11:48 pm

omg, i love this poem. i love how its kind of bumpy sounding. i can actaully realte to this one, Keep writing!

Comment by down4life: Jan 10, 2009 1:42 am

i likeit its unique good job!!!

Comment by friendZdogZ: Jan 10, 2009 6:03 am

"Am I what's making you do
Distant?" - that is kinda weird
any way....
i like this poem a lot because of how it's written.
really different and i think the words are heard louder because of the way it's written.
great job

Comment by BuriedDeepAsICanDig: Jan 10, 2009 11:02 am

i can relate. when i started high school so many people changed and thats the feelingof distance i never put on paper. thanks.

Comment by ThoughtlessEscape: Jan 10, 2009 3:30 pm

Loved it, so true about things like that, very good.

Comment by raya: Jan 11, 2009 4:20 am

if we are in the same situation should we let go?

Comment by chelseaatpeace: Jan 12, 2009 7:50 pm

this poem is so amazing!so true

Comment by autumnangel1115: Jan 12, 2009 8:34 pm

This is great! I love how you wrote this, it is different yet amazing at the same time!

Comment by heartbrokengirl1988: Jan 15, 2009 9:21 am

nice poem.

Comment by smartestblonde: Jan 16, 2009 11:55 am

beautiful! I've had that happen personally. I wouldn't change anything about it.

Comment by ForgottenMemory: Feb 8, 2009 1:07 pm

this is a good poem, my best friend who I have been friends with for 11 yrs, we're becoming more and more distant so I can relate to this poem. good job!!

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