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A Trip

White light seeps through the leaves,
A delicate weave of shades of green,
At a bench of wooden we sat,
With broad smiles and joyous laughters we had.

Anep, Qiqi and L between stones,
In temperate silky river,
We chatted, we teased, we laughed,
Together in the shining mirror.

A passionate couple, a beautiful couple,
Mel and Abe, bonded in the flowing water,
At a pond, just amongst the two,
Romance and love, was seen from each other.

Adsorbed in papers of story,
Jue and Kaety, gracefully sitting,
On the green rocks, at the wooden bench,
Just read and read, ignorant of the mother nature's singing.

We ate, a hearty meal,
Surprised I was, cooked by two diners,
In gaity we were, of care we feel,
Amongst good friends, of silver forever.



by scorpio
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 12, 2006 8:10 pm
awwwwww...thats so0o0o sweet,dude..i really luv it!! exactly what we've going thru yesterday..awww...
Beautifully written..i luv how u described me & abe in the 3rd stanza.. Smiley thx!!!
great poem.i luv it so much!!
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 12, 2006 8:43 pm
im sory if me & him terlalu passionate yesterday.. (>.<)"
Comment by babytee33: Dec 13, 2006 3:50 am
I agree with everyonelse its very good.
Comment by InMyDreams: Dec 13, 2006 5:40 am
awesome poem!!! it sounds like it was an awesome time Sticking tongue out i lovez it
Comment by xfobxfanx: Dec 16, 2006 12:48 am
wow that was so beautiful....
Comment by scorpio: Dec 16, 2006 8:29 am
it was an amzaing trip. n thanx all!
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: Dec 19, 2006 6:48 am
Wow this poem is so so so prettyful!...Awww...sorry I don't have anything else to say about it but it is so well written and i love the way you describe things. Btw thanks for the comment...yeah it just came to me randomly, i will try to come up with a part 2 but it was just kinda...erm well spontanious? If you get me. Xxx
Comment by NIKKIx: Dec 26, 2006 9:30 pm
O MY LORD! YOU COULD NOT HAVE MADE THAT CUTER IF YOU TRIED! LOVING IT SOOOOOOOO MUCH!
Comment by Pollyanna: Jan 20, 2007 1:59 am
what a delightful poem..such beautiful words..Polly
Comment by Christina1985: Jan 28, 2007 1:52 pm
i love the poem. Christina
Comment by Reece: Feb 7, 2007 1:00 am
This is really good, keep writing
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