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Your Feel Good Tool

All I can see is hate, lies and treason all around
People who anxiously wait to take a stab at me
Well line up because admission doesn't cost a thing
Ready your words and unleash them onto me
That's what I'm here for to be your feel good tool
Don't be embarassed, there is no need to shy away
Let your purest hate and darkest anger tear me apart
Do not fret if I appear to be broken or have a missing piece
I will fix me for you though I'm just a tool
I may never look or be the same but that doesn't matter to anyone
As long as I stick around so they have someone to put down
I was designed to make everyone feel better about themselves
By taking only the low roads and claiming down as mine
You can come and visit but in the end I'll help you pack
I'll make you feel like your life is better than this one of mine
I will take your hand and tell you just how it is
That I am broken
And can't even fix myself
So go find yourself
A new f**king tool

by Lonesum
posted on 08/30/2007

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Comment by StarGirl09: Aug 30, 2007 9:01 am
wow !!good!! but kinda sad!
Comment by Lonesum: Aug 30, 2007 11:25 am
Thank you so much. I wrote this one when I was angry. Though it pretty much describes the way I feel at any given moment.
Comment by shyhallow: Sep 2, 2007 10:11 pm
Wow... When I first read this poem, it left me speechless. for example, in some of the phrases you can really feel the heat of the emotion.

Overall, it's an awesome poem



Comment by Plugin2Noise: Sep 3, 2007 3:24 pm
I want to listen to metal now.
Comment by GracelessFall: Sep 9, 2007 11:33 am
Sweet-ass poem dude..... great read
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