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You Will All Pay

My head is bent
I'm looking down,
So no one will see,
my evil frown.

You all think it's great,
to make fun of me.
Wait until the day,
I'll make you all see.

Especially you who broke me,
with your web of lies.
Not knowing when you left,
the pain built up inside.

It's all going to change
Just you wait.
I'll be the one,
who determines your fate.

I'll be the one,
you'll beg and plead.
On your anguish and pain,
I will feed.

My mind is dark,
My soul is long gone.
Soon you will all find out,
Why I was so withdrawn.

All I ever wanted was love,
for someone to understand.
But no one would let it happen,
As if it was stolen from my very hand.

I'm just demented,
I don't have happy thoughts.
All caused by you,
and the heartache you brought.

My anger is so intense,
I'll make you all pay.
I'll smirk and laugh,
as I make you regret this day.

by PrayForMe
posted on 01/28/2008

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Comment by deadrose37: Jun 21, 2008 9:49 pm
Your emotions are that alike of mine. Everyone in this world has no clue what is coming for them. They will pay for they have said and done. They will for no one shall offer them salvation for their evil deeds. This world shall be ours one day, and "they" will be our slaves.
Comment by XDiamondBackX: Jan 28, 2008 2:15 am
This poem is so good. Uhh vote up Open smile
Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 28, 2008 8:52 am
I love it!!!
Comment by BlackLily: Jan 28, 2008 10:23 am
Wow. That was really deep.
Comment by Poison: Jan 28, 2008 11:39 am
I really love it.
Comment by cwagnon: Jan 28, 2008 12:35 pm
heat warming.I like it.
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Jan 28, 2008 12:44 pm
AMAZING! i love it and only hope for my survival i'm not one of them! lol jk Open smile
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 28, 2008 1:23 pm
woah! only WONDERFUL! i love it! great job! :] :] :] :] :]
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 28, 2008 2:29 pm
Wow this is really good. It really opens eyes! This is how alot of people really feel when there getting teased and this is the start of all the school shootings and crap because kids dont know when to stop and its really sad. Well i hope you dont really feel like this! Great poem. =]
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 28, 2008 2:40 pm
I and sad to say i feel this way too sometimes...but enough about me great poem Smiley
Comment by loveme77: Jan 28, 2008 3:26 pm
"All I ever wanted was love,
for someone to understand.
But no one would let it happen,
As if it was stolen from my very hand"

Wow. Speechless. I love this poem. Well thought out and brilliant. Very good.
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 28, 2008 5:57 pm
I love it! Great job! Open smile
Comment by shirotora: Jan 28, 2008 8:44 pm
awesome poem, you created relly strong images and the whole plot of the poem was pretty much awesome. grgeat job.
vote up !!
Comment by Reece: Jan 28, 2008 11:21 pm
I love it also, Keep up the good work
Comment by tourcherdsoul: Jan 29, 2008 9:45 am
wow ive got serious goosebumps dude great job keep writing
Comment by RobcNky: Jan 29, 2008 7:35 pm
Too bad a few did not seek release in reading and authoring such work before they committed harm
Comment by shadowofasoul: Jan 29, 2008 10:00 pm
"good good let the hate flow through you" ~ the emperor on starwars "If you want to kill me, despise me, hate me, and live in an unsightly way..."~uchiha itatchi (from naruto) hm...i bath in anger and i love hate .......mwahahaha mwahahaHAHA MWAHAHAHAHA*cough cough*
Comment by shadowofasoul: Jan 29, 2008 10:02 pm
lol---great poem i feel this way to...lets band together and take over the world haha
Comment by hotchick: Feb 2, 2008 6:59 pm
holy smokes that's good u have some talent. Sticking tongue out
Comment by gaara: Mar 3, 2008 7:45 am
That brings out the heart and soul of everyone because there are lots of people that get picked on at school and this is probally how they feel sometimes it warms my heart because it should be stopped. Great poem Smiley.
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 9:26 pm
wow this is so evil but i like it
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