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you should have noticed!

the cuts on my wrist,
say how i feel,
but you wouldnt notice because you dont care,
the blood i bled,
was not for you,
as it puddles at my feet,
i slowly turn my back to you,
i wanted you to notice,
so that you could help,
it was the only way i could express my pain,
to you and everyone else,
but you didnt listen you didnt here it yell out,
you didnt watch it slowly drip to the ground,
but i did,
and now im finally going to put this bottle to my head,
let it burn,
as i slowoly become dead,
you should have noticed you should have helped,
i guess im to fucked up for any one to care,
well i hope you miss me and feel sick cause you drove me to do this...

by lost4evr
posted on 03/17/2008

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Comment by deadrose37: Jun 22, 2008 5:37 pm
its good because it happens to so many people in this sad world. you're just one who writes about it before it's too late...
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 17, 2008 10:16 am
ummmm........u sure ure ok?
Comment by Rayofsunshine: Mar 17, 2008 11:41 am
wow.
i feel that wat sometimes.

but try not to think like that...ya know?
Comment by TMacias: Mar 17, 2008 1:21 pm
love is something we dont understand. Its hard to love and harder to lose out of love. He wasnt good enough for you and soon you will find the one man to fulfill your happiness. Have faith God knows what he does.
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Mar 17, 2008 3:09 pm
inner promblems this poem reflects
Comment by karinapicaboo: Mar 17, 2008 6:36 pm
i really can feel the pain and passion of your words,
please try to get better. i know it may be hard but i hope you get better.
any time you need to talk im here too :]
GREAT POEM! KEEP WRITING!<3
Comment by shadowed: Mar 17, 2008 7:55 pm
This is a great poem. I can totally relate. Keep it up.
Comment by lovechristina: Mar 18, 2008 9:23 am
i enjoyed reading reading your poems i have some very closely related. read some if you like. i don't have enough points to puth them in yet though.
Comment by Catwoman772: Jun 9, 2008 1:24 pm
i can feel the emotion from this!
keep writing!
love it!
vote up Smiley
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