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She’s agreed to give up
What else is there to do?
She has fallen.
My fallen angel.
Her wings, immobilized.
Robes, burnt to coal.
Her beautiful face, stained with tears.
Scarlet rose petals fall.
Thorns piercing her skin.
“we’ll never fall apart” you once said.
Keep these memories to yourself,
Sweet fallen angel.


by ixdunnox
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by theme: Jan 30, 2007 5:39 pm
i like!
Comment by gothic666angel6: Jan 31, 2007 7:53 am
wow its short but amazing! the emotion and powerful-ness make up for length! i love it! it reminds me of the lies i was once told and promises never kept... making me feel like an angel, dropped the the floor and smashed into tiny little pieces.
Comment by BrokenSoul: Feb 1, 2007 9:18 am
i agree with gothic666angel6 this is a great poem!!!
Comment by InMyDreams: Mar 3, 2007 9:50 pm
wow.. from what gothic666angel6 said i can totally see the deep meaning in this poem.. beautifully said <333 love it
Comment by footprints: Apr 27, 2007 9:20 am
This is very touching. Pulling at the heart strings stuff.
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