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Yesterday

Yesterday is gone
but tomorrow waits forever
can't see ahead
bound to right now
dark may be beyond
but light has to come
my soul may be broken
but I'm picking up pieces
maybe in a far off someday
some one can fix it again
though the fire dies away
there is still some warmth
faith is all I have
but it isn't just waiting
got to find it, and not let go
I may be bleeding
but hopefully it will stop
I may die soon
but right now I am breathing
the pain hurts, and is getting stronger
but I am not giving in
hope may be shattered
but I am still standing
yesterday is gone
but tomorrow waits forever

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I dunno where this came from
it just started flowing
I revised it, it is a really quick poem
only took me 15 mins
So tell me what you think!
(except grammar comments)
I know my spelling is suxish
I am only 10, give me a break

by Darkdaydreamer
posted on 11/03/2009

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Comments: 5
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Comment by mybeloved: Nov 4, 2009 6:46 am
this is really pretty, i'm really feeling it.
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 3, 2009 3:55 pm
wow dis is very sorrowful... and ur ten, jeez when i was ten, i was barely writing in my school journal.. good job though.
Comment by gene: Nov 3, 2009 4:41 pm
very good job dont forget to read about the brain u no longer need faith there are facts. oh thank science! :]
Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Nov 4, 2009 5:54 pm
yesterday is gone
but tomorrow waits forever

Excellent!
Comment by mistressofdarkness: Nov 7, 2009 3:19 pm
I want to thank everyone who is always commenting on my poetry
It means alot to me you guys!
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