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Windows

If the eyes are the windows to the soul
Then my eyes are frames that contain
Only shards of stained glass

My pupils would be the towers
Of abandoned chapels
Where only crows inhabit
The dark pigment of the glazed
Layers that stare at you now

Empty pews stare back
Like a crib that once contained
A sleeping infant before Heaven
Changed its indecisive mind on the youth’s
Permanent placement

You look away
With a demoralized awe

I blink twice to display the next slide
That projects from under these swollen lids
You regain connection with a moral purpose
Of justifying what u have marked with
A vain reversal

But the next image reveals
A foreign replica
Of your being

No angels are hovering
Over your now disembodied
Soul, as you strive for a more
Admirable view on this vile
Planet

I feel regret as the once clear
Windows of your innocence
Become fogged and cracked
By the chilling truth of the human
Enterprise

by SilentWords
posted on 01/12/2009

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Comment by SoLittleTime: Jan 14, 2009 5:55 am
so amazing, im not sure what to think. im stunned, i guess.
you are brilliant
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Jan 12, 2009 3:33 pm
Wow!! this is truely the work of someone who has real professional talent.. I love your words.. I love all the lines, and when they are all put together they make such brillient writings!!*smiles*
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Jan 12, 2009 3:40 pm
I love the end, fogged and cracked, as if they got too close and your breath fogged their eyes.

Like a crib that once contained
A sleeping infant before Heaven
Changed its indecisive mind on the youth’s
Permanent placement

And that is a bleak image, but brilliantly put.
Damn, your good!
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Jan 12, 2009 3:56 pm
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!
Comment by nocturnus: Jan 12, 2009 4:57 pm
Pure talent, so very deep, amazing and excelent.
Comment by Whatlovehasdone: Jan 13, 2009 2:45 pm
"If the eyes are the windows to the soul
Then my eyes are frames that contain
Only shards of stained glass"

"I feel regret as the once clear
Windows of your innocence
Become fogged and cracked
By the chilling truth of the human
Enterprise"

that is freaking awesome. "By the chilling truth of the human enterprise"...that is some damn good work right there. gave me the chills.
Comment by Mermaid: Jan 13, 2009 5:02 pm
Wow. I absolutely love this. The metaphor of the old empty church is beautiful, haunting.

The descriptive words absolutely left me breathless.

BRAVO!
Comment by Josianne: Jan 14, 2009 8:06 pm
I love it.!
INTENSE.
Comment by heartbrokengirl1988: Jan 15, 2009 9:00 am
great poem.
Comment by jenskie78: Jan 15, 2009 6:57 pm
nice! keep it up!
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jan 16, 2009 12:09 pm
amazing !!
Comment by ThisGirl: Jan 16, 2009 12:10 pm
Good Poem!!! =]
Comment by dead2you55: Jan 16, 2009 4:35 pm
all i can say is wow
Comment by darkman: May 7, 2009 4:47 pm
absolutely brilliant
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