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Willow of Sorrow


As day fades into night
My eyes close without sadness or delight
Taken within the night silent haze
I fall into the abyss of unconsciousness

With close open eyes
I see the lake of memories
As waves distill into hallow cries
It dries the dim land of misery

For willow trees sheds the leaves of despair
As two shadows of the past
Begin to dance in pair

Within their swift movements of emotion
Soon comes their devastation
As a young girl falls into depression
While a father show no care to this oppression

Softly the girl weeps her mistakes
For she is rejected from the woods of content
A home it used to be
But stain within is torment

So she lays on the soil of nothingness
As the willows comes to awaken
It blooms the leaves of sorrow
Only fed by her ebony tears of sadness

Copyright ©2008 Donna Maya Cooper

by DeadMoonChild
posted on 03/19/2008

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Comment by DeadMoonChild: Mar 19, 2008 8:33 am
Ignore the I on the front and end. I will edit it out soon.
Comment by google: Mar 19, 2008 8:40 am

really good.

one little thing , I think the word "sleep" is warmer than "unconsciousness".
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 19, 2008 8:55 am
i dont agree google. i like that word xD

it is a very good poem.
most of my poems developed during lessons XD

but anyways i like that poem!! keep on writing
Comment by Mangekyo: Mar 19, 2008 9:25 am
indeed quite something to love and reread............ good job
Comment by tobeloved: Apr 11, 2008 4:29 pm
Very deep.. I found.. Good job!
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