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will i sleep tonight?

it is midnight, and i'm still awake
this isn't right, i made a mistake
i'm tossing and turning and my eye's won't shut
the fire is burning and still they won't shut

my fears are consuming my heart
i've failed before i could even start
i've never felt so frozen, sleeping so close to the fire
i can feel my fingertip's, burn with struggle and desire

slowly, i become a hostile creature
ravaging through these clean white sheets
constant howl's to the moon,predict my future
the taste of their blood is bitter, sweet

is this right?
will i sleep toinight?

by phantomhearts
posted on 04/08/2008

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Comment by DeadMoonChild: Apr 8, 2008 9:44 am
"slowly, i become a hostile creature
ravaging through these clean white sheets
constant howl's to the moon,predict my future"

I like this part of the poem.Good Job.Smiley

You should go and read my latest poems
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Apr 8, 2008 12:28 pm
yeah i like that part also a lot Smiley
very good poem!!
Comment by tobeloved: Apr 11, 2008 4:25 pm
wow.. i like the part that DeadMoonChild mentioned earlier. Very good job on this poem!!
Comment by asdfyz: May 1, 2008 9:35 am
good poem.. Iwrite mybest stuff late at. Night too. Ideally liked urs lot!
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 28, 2008 6:34 am
i love it all!! this is really good...good work! =)
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