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when i die!

stab me,
cut me,
hurt me more,
walk away as i die slowly on the floor,

i can see this is not my life any more,
i can feel that you want me to die,

as i lay in pain,
as the day fades,
no one is coming,
i am not safe,

i am dieing now,
and will be dead soon,
this is a great day,
for it'll end soon,

yes, i will miss you,
and im sure you'll miss me too,
when you finally kill me off,

dont worry,
i kno what i'll do,
i'll haunt you and hurt you,
untill you are what i was,
the pain and torchure,
you'll then start to believe there is no god,

i'm going to make you feel like i did one day,
and your gonna think ur in hell,

as i laugh and watch you die,
i wont feel any pain inside,
but you will and then you'll die,

i guess i'll see you in the after life!

by lost4evr
posted on 03/03/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 3, 2008 11:13 am
very deep
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Mar 3, 2008 11:13 am
lol great poem! i love it!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 3, 2008 11:19 am
i liked it.
Comment by forevergone1790: Mar 3, 2008 12:23 pm
wow! this was very deep!! but at the same time very good
Comment by darckchild: Mar 3, 2008 1:34 pm
deep!
Comment by SmotherMe: Mar 3, 2008 1:46 pm
Very deep and really good. Love it
Comment by andypandy114: Mar 3, 2008 2:15 pm
LMAOO wise ass comment at the end of a deep ass poem NICEE II LIKEE ! x)
Comment by XangelicXshadowsX: Mar 3, 2008 2:29 pm
nicely written...^-^
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 5:05 pm
Very deep, very well written, and very good, lol keep on writing =)
Comment by brokenguilt: Mar 3, 2008 5:05 pm
nice.
Comment by bloodyhands13: Mar 4, 2008 7:03 am
i really like your poem its really dark and you did a really good job of getting out the emotion>
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