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were all Messed Up, yoU just hide it Better

Under the magicians sun, were all imaginary,
cover our mirrors, our reflections are to scary,
deep under our mask, we hide all thats ugly,
our perversion and shame, our persona is so lovely,
afraid of the pure form, that'd be cast away a freak,
deform to conform, against the masses were to meek,
time to rise above the ashes, the simmering despair,
i've torn away my mask, along with what they care,
obscene and repulsive, traitors to their way,
blind to the truth, thats in everything we say,
now take our freak show, and show them what we got,
to them were already damned, and will forever rot.

by poetryismusic
posted on 11/02/2009

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Comment by Luv4shelly: Nov 2, 2009 1:51 pm
woah is all i can say. this is so true and just mind boggling. WOAH. amazing.
Comment by rayne482: Nov 2, 2009 7:53 pm
You have a few typos... "to scary" should be "too scary"

"thats ugly" to "that's ugly"

"to meek" to "too meek"

"thats in" to "that's in"


Very great poem though... i absolutely love it... well written, great rhyme scheme... keep writing.... oh yeah.... votes up Smiley
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Nov 2, 2009 11:07 pm
Wow....just wow....
Aside from the typos, it's an awsome write!
-votes up- nice job. Smiley
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 3, 2009 9:55 am
that was inc-red-ible!! i loved it
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 18, 2009 5:47 pm
Another impressive, Thought-provoking and incredibly deep write coming from you. You're so talented! I admire your work, it's awesome. whoa o.o
Comment by prettyspl: Nov 7, 2009 10:58 pm
One of your best! I couldn't stop reading it .. over and over. I loved the flow .. the meanings all came home. Thank you for such a great write! : )
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