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Wasteland Beauty

I stumbled among the drunken mass
drugged dilated pupils fixated on a short skirted lass
we were on our way
hand in hand
with the shriek of the band guiding us through
she wrenched away in one of those "all of a suddens"
moved to the groove
like gravity had nothin
she danced her ground
groped and harrassed
i didn't mind
had it focused on
a twirling of breasts
bursting the blouse
a bouncing ass flashing the lace
legs lunging and torso glistening
an intangible sight of ectasy within reach by my outstretched hand...

this was it
my last stand

she stalked sexily towards me
her lips red and swollen engulfed mine
i wrapped around her oh so fine
we gyrated pulsating rhythmically
last chance do the dance
serpentine she stripped herself clean

Welcome to the Wasteland

by FavoriteTheMute
posted on 10/04/2008

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Comment by wordfreak: Nov 30, 2008 12:51 pm
hmmm... nice imagery but i think you can do better with the wording and flow of things.
Comment by fade: Oct 4, 2008 1:55 pm
You propose such interesting ideas. "Welcome to the Wasteland." Quite the concept. As always, great wording that paints the pictures vividly, but still manages to convey strong emotion.

Very good! Again.
Comment by Viperrack: Oct 4, 2008 2:33 pm
believe me, this is the one I understood by the first time reading it, and the one I'm willing to read endless times.
Great messages, relaxing way of writing and desribing.
Nice work buddy!
Comment by darkangel111: Oct 5, 2008 5:35 am
i'm sry but i don't like this at all. but keep writing, maybe i'll like the next one.
Comment by smearX0Xash: Nov 11, 2008 1:51 pm
cool. Nice imagery. I really like how you said what was on your mind instead of dumbing, or calming it down for those people who don't like things as graphic.
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