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Venom

faster goes my heart
dulling is the pain
slower are my thoughts
as the venon moves through my veins

deep is the bite
that ended my world
i thought you were my white knight
instead you were my doom

as you take off your guise
black sight fills my eyes
lessening are the cries
as my body slowly dies

blood drip, drips from my arms
oh how i fell for your charms
you were just the thing
like a bird who had spread its wings

soaring into the fading night
wishing i could join and take flight

one last breath
before this death
and all i have left to say is
"i give you my life"

by LostInside
posted on 11/04/2009

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Comment by darknessveils15: Nov 15, 2009 10:15 am
this is amazing. i can relatee.
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 4, 2009 3:19 pm
reminds me of a certain book I read....o.o Anyway, this is a good poem, very sad......love can be real...fatal. I know that much...keep writin!
Comment by SecretsLie: Nov 4, 2009 4:54 pm
i really really like this poem!
it has such a good meaning and importance to it
great job!
Comment by KillerBlueEyes: Nov 4, 2009 8:02 pm
i really like this poem it has great symbolism. awesome job!!
Comment by angelofthetruth: Nov 4, 2009 8:40 pm
wow this is really good
Comment by Greyhoundfb: Nov 5, 2009 12:52 am
to whom are you giving your life to??
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 5, 2009 5:27 am
wow...*eyes burn* This is incredible...I hardly know what to say...
It's so saddening...
Comment by Joshman: Nov 5, 2009 9:40 pm
Good poem,,,,It reminds me of how it feels when you first start to fall in love with someone and they don't return those same fellings....Good job.....
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