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Fiber (Untitled #1)

Perhaps if there was nothing
Everything would fall 3 lefts too far
Resonating in the growls of newspaper-mache
Folded boxes trap to torture such drooling time
Each footstep a pulsing reminder of its geometric hell...
Clearly, simple cell-splitting mitosis is in order
To replace the distress of enduring such complexity in being.

"Oh the perils of living in 3D"

by ObiJAh
posted on 08/11/2009

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Comment by ZackeryDaley: Aug 11, 2009 4:31 pm
indeed a very articulate and thought about poem. very good I vote up
Comment by ObiJAh: Aug 11, 2009 5:30 pm
actually this is very poorly written and one draft not thought out at all

your comment was most likely more thought out than this poem

so nice job to you
Comment by SilentWords: Aug 12, 2009 8:11 am
This made me think, I love poems that can get those rusty wheels spinning.


Perhaps if there was nothing
Everything would fall 3 lefts too far

very interesting line. Nice Job.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Aug 16, 2009 8:43 am
Oh shit...a poem someone's thought about before posting!

2D would be easier, but perhaps less perfect.
(2D boobs are a good example of why it's inferior!)

Good stuff.
Comment by ObiJAh: Aug 17, 2009 8:10 am
2D boobs are quite tricky
they either are mistaken for compact disks..
or they come out square

either way not very satisfying
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