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How dark this place, how grim!
Where the black wings of ravens shadow the sky.
Where the winds blow round the tower high, like the desolate cries of a murdered child.
My own life, once so keen and bright, grows dim.
My own song falters; my pulse is wild.
In my dreams i hear the toll of Death's bell.
Beneath my feet yawn the pits of Hell.....

by bloodrush
posted on 04/28/2007

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Comment by prettynpink: Apr 28, 2007 7:19 am
I'm sorry to hear about your father. my mom died when i was eight years old. I know what that can do to a person. poetry was the only thing i had in order to release all the bottled emotions, and as long as you have an outlet, it makes it nicer. It's never easy. I loved your poem though. very powerful
Comment by shyhallow: Apr 28, 2007 10:09 am
the descriptions in this poem, truly amazing work.
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