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I cut neatly in four straight rows,
And watch the crimson regret flow,
This all to let me know-
That I am still alive.

My head starts spinning,
My body goes numb,
But still I press harder
on this razor blade.

I watch as my life flows
From the four staight cut rows,
This all to let me know-
I am still alive.

by Jasper
posted on 02/15/2008

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Comment by Poison: Feb 15, 2008 8:14 am
Don't put your writing down hun, This is very good. And I know how you feel. I can really relate.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 15, 2008 8:23 am
this is a really great poem. i can really relate also.
Comment by babyboogt82886: Feb 15, 2008 11:38 am
very good poem...and i also can relate!
Comment by lostandlonely: Feb 16, 2008 11:31 am
hey this is a great poem ...sounds like my night two days ago...
definitely relatable
~Amber~
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