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Twisted Grin

Slash your throat
Rip out your veins.
Maybe then,
you'll feel pain.

Claw your eyes,
Cut your heart.
It won't make things right
But it's a start.

Eat your flesh
Devour your soul.
This is for my heart
Where you left a hole.

I want to watch,
the light leave your eyes.
I want to choke you,
So you can't cry.

I want every drop of blood,
drained from you.
Your time on earth
Is long past due.

Stab you once,
Stab you twice.
You thought it was a game,
Now you pay the price.

Watching you struggle
For that much needed air.
All I do is laugh,
As you slowly die with despair.

I'll then put a gun to my head,
Pleased with what I've done.
The trigger is pulled,
It only took one.

As I think of these thoughts,
My face is in a twisted grin.
I start for your house,
Where it will all begin.

by PrayForMe
posted on 02/05/2008

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Comment by kayla: Feb 5, 2008 5:54 am
Great poem, flows well.Smileyvery dark, good job.
Comment by loveme77: Feb 5, 2008 7:50 am
Great flow! Deep and dark. Very good.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 5, 2008 9:31 am
excellent.. very passionate
Comment by lost4evr: Feb 5, 2008 11:23 am
i love it, its got a great flow to it and it sounds good!
Comment by MinaOdette: Feb 5, 2008 11:49 am
a haunting talent. (wish i had it) Smiley
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 5, 2008 12:26 pm
Great poem. I like this.
Comment by mariana: Feb 5, 2008 1:18 pm
It's well written. and Enjoyed.
Comment by Syrinx: Feb 5, 2008 1:59 pm
Wow... Intense.
Comment by aqua4ever: Feb 5, 2008 3:08 pm
I love it! Vote up/
Comment by RobcNky: Feb 5, 2008 4:46 pm
maybe Im sick but this put a twisted grin on my face!
Comment by hotchick: Feb 5, 2008 5:21 pm
ur good. i love it <3 it's very dark and creepy. really kool Sticking tongue out
Comment by fallenangelx14: Feb 5, 2008 6:08 pm
WOW I LOVE IT!! that made me smile. I'm so jealous of how you write. I wish I could do that

Comment by jayway65: Feb 5, 2008 7:31 pm
This is a really good poem!!
I LOVE IT!!! I wish i could write like that.
Comment by Blazen: Feb 5, 2008 7:33 pm
This is amazing i love it dark and emotional exallent job x
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 5, 2008 8:59 pm
this is a great poem... dark and creepy but great
Comment by shirotora: Feb 6, 2008 12:04 am
totally creepy and awesome poem. I liked it alot. great job.
Comment by K3v1n: Feb 6, 2008 3:33 am
Very cool poem Smiley
Comment by christi823: Feb 6, 2008 8:40 am
Deep. Gory.
I love it.
[:
Comment by rebela: Feb 6, 2008 10:45 am
that is very beautiful and i think about doin that to alot of people
Comment by sassicat: Feb 6, 2008 11:10 am
Amazing poem! Great poem!!!
Comment by patches: Feb 6, 2008 2:18 pm
i agree with robncky, this poem makes me smile. havent we had thoughts like this? i love how you talk about what you wan to do to this person, then switch to putting the gun to your head and then you head for their house. you talk in past present and future tense, so the reader isnt really sure what EXACTLY is happening. it adds a sense of confusion and insanity that perfectly completes the poem. great job!
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Feb 6, 2008 5:48 pm
Nice pick of words! A well written poem!
Comment by KabrieloftheFallen: Feb 7, 2008 11:54 am
i like it alot... wery dark and tells of so much pain and suffering yours not theirs but still good.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Feb 8, 2008 1:35 pm
omg this was really good!
I loved it Smiley
very very well written!!
Comment by gothchik13: Feb 9, 2008 7:49 am
wow! you really know ur stuff!
Comment by FreeFalling: Feb 17, 2008 4:20 pm
Awsome poem.
Comment by aqua4ever: Feb 18, 2008 2:30 pm
This is a reallllly good poem!
Comment by SilentlyScreamingInside: Feb 22, 2008 12:13 pm
Wow...amazing poem...I saw your poem "blood" first and your right. they are similar.

Though both are similar they both are diffrent (i that makes any sence to you)
love it.

vote up
Comment by gaara: Mar 3, 2008 7:48 am
Great poem. Vote up. Keep up the good work i know you can because you write all time favorites for me Smiley.
Comment by HeartlessShadow: Mar 13, 2008 2:29 pm
WOW what an awesome poem. Even my friends liked it although she was a little hyber Smiley
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 16, 2008 9:51 am
wow i love this poem! now i have a quench fo blood!
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 13, 2008 8:53 am
Hehehe i liked it good job
Have fun
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 9:28 pm
wow! this is really really evil. dude what's up with u? it's great but majourly evil
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