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Troubles

Deep within the dark
is where my heart lies
My mind eating away at my soul.
The clock ticking away at my demise.

I'm so heartless
I'm so mean
Can't yet go to hell
Stuck in the between

Ruthless and evil
I'm not allowed to get back on track.
What do you do
When you already know that you've cracked?

I know I should at least try
to make it go away.
Slowly but surely
My heart starts to decay.

I'm just lying here not moving
wondering what could have went so wrong
Is this the way
It was meant to be all along?

Pain is all I feel
So pain is all I can give.
So dead on the inside
Oh, how I wish I could live.

There's no point in saying this
No one really ever does care.
Once happy eyes
turn into a cold, glassy stare.

It's just the way it is
I'm just heartless can't you see.
No hope for anyone,
And definitely no hope for me.

by PrayForMe
posted on 11/11/2008

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Comment by tnhelos18: Nov 14, 2008 12:31 pm

This is good

Comment by angelheart16: Nov 11, 2008 1:13 am

i have hope for u, everything will be alright, try and think of positves, like ur a really good poet, coz u are, and im sure u'll have ppl tell u that here, because we're not alone, lotta hope Smiley

Comment by SoLittleTime: Nov 11, 2008 5:09 am

There is hope, always. hope is created by you, so if you dont have it, get some, because there will be times when its all you have. really good poem though. i like it

Comment by imani: Nov 11, 2008 6:45 am

i pray dat u dnt give up yet you still young always have hope

Comment by fultseri: Nov 11, 2008 8:28 am

really good. i feel the same all the time.

Comment by Selene: Nov 11, 2008 8:39 am

I feel this poem so much.

Comment by Devourthedarkness: Nov 11, 2008 11:06 am

i can relate friend..and great job..you have a talent..im proud of you.

Comment by BrokenSmile831: Nov 11, 2008 11:39 am

i like this poem, its good

Comment by Riful: Nov 11, 2008 1:13 pm

That's very strong and very deep. You have talent. Don't give up hope and don't always side on what other people think. It's what YOU think. Thats all. Very nice poem PrayForMe.

Comment by wiseguy7669: Nov 11, 2008 1:45 pm

very very good poem.

Comment by tommy: Nov 11, 2008 3:25 pm

Oh but there is hope for you my child.
If you look closer at your heart you would see a light there forever pulsing your destiny.
Jesus is in you.
Love&Peace Smiley

Comment by tommy: Nov 11, 2008 3:29 pm

Thats from my brother holychild.. I told him about you and I kind stole the saying in his message.
I hope you dont mind man Smiley

Comment by underneathitall: Nov 11, 2008 6:56 pm

i liked this poemm

Comment by StainedCrimson: Nov 11, 2008 10:47 pm

I really like the wording that you used, and the meaning behind it. Good job. (I won't try and give you advice because I don't really know the situation. I hope it works out, though.)

Comment by xxdistortedxxxx: Nov 12, 2008 5:18 am

hope fades.
but hold onto it as long as u can.

Comment by VMPlvr: Nov 13, 2008 10:23 am

:] lovely.

Comment by Cornflakes: Nov 14, 2008 9:20 am

This Is Really Good. Smiley

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