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Trip

when I look upon my trip
in my heart I feel a fear,
my mind gets eerie thoughts
as if my time has come near.

so much I could have done
so much I could have accomplished,
but now I'm hearing scary messeges
from my subconscious.

when I lay at night to rest
I see visions of my death,
now I'm left wondering
what did I do to deserve that horrible death.

by harrydawg
posted on 02/10/2008

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Comment by loveme77: Feb 10, 2008 1:37 pm
Very good poem. I had vivid images in my head while reading it, you get straight to the point so everyone knows what you're going through. great rhymes and choice of words =) Vote up.
Comment by juturna: Feb 10, 2008 9:47 pm
Oooo spooky! what kind of a death i wonder
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