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Torn Apart

Torn apart
Can't keep control
Mind's spinning
Thinking straight
Isn't an option
Hurt and broken
A shattered heart
Don't know what to do
Can't give up
Not now
But moving on
Is hard
I can tell
Let the thoughts
Slip through
Your mind
For all of time
Is on your side

by TheEmoFreak
posted on 09/25/2007

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Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: Sep 25, 2007 4:08 pm
wow....
now this one i reall really like.
gosh you have such good talent.
this is amazing.
Comment by vampireheart: Sep 27, 2007 4:19 am
great!!!
i love it!!!

^-^
Comment by funkyninja898: Sep 29, 2007 3:32 pm
great poem, very..... i don't really have a word for it.
Comment by redblackspider: Oct 3, 2007 7:17 am
interesting..... i like it
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