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Torn

I listen to the waves as they rumble
and roar and ripple to shore
Haunting sounds that capture my soul
Leaving me breathless and begging for more.

My watery mistress screams out to me
Sad and mournful she cries out to the night
She waits for me in the cold dark sea.

Stark brilliant stars stare down at me
Alone at the waters edge
Taunting me, teasing me
Her whispered promises to set me free.

All I have to do is close my eyes
Just give in and take her limp cold hand
And whisper my goodbyes
To face my demise.

I’m not ready I scream to the sea!
But I’m caught in her wave of sweet song
So soothing, so welcoming she sings to me
Like a drug that I crave but it feels so wrong
But I stumble closer to the edge,
To her; to where I feel I belong.

by prettyspl
posted on 11/07/2009

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Comment by mcmil: Nov 7, 2009 4:10 am
dude thats some deep stuff
keep writing
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 7, 2009 7:49 am
whoa...wow *shivers* I agree, This is very deep, The imagery you portrayed is beautiful, and I agree...haunting, in this very lovely way Smiley
Comment by NaturalBeauty: Nov 7, 2009 8:18 am
its so deep and so beautiful! ur really good!
Comment by bloodwolfX: Nov 7, 2009 3:26 pm
amazing! very deep and beautiful!
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Jan 13, 2010 1:16 am
i agree with everyone especially princessNyra, i love the last two lines the most. good rhymes, thought that stanzas, some are shorter than others, some are longer. i dont know if you did that on purpose but even if you didnt, it was still a great poem, i enjoyed it very much, definitely one of the better ones i read today
Comment by princessNyra: Jan 5, 2010 7:20 am
awesome! i like it a lot!!..
especially da last verse...
"But I’m caught in her wave of sweet song
So soothing, so welcoming she sings to me
Like a drug that I crave but it feels so wrong
But I stumble closer to the edge,
To her; to where I feel I belong"
Comment by younga2006: Jan 20, 2010 12:00 am
nice
Comment by missingmom: Jan 20, 2010 6:12 pm
Wow! I haven't been on this site for so long, because to be quite honest, I became bored with a lot of the childish stuff that was being posted, I took a break and just today I decided to pop in and see if there was interesting and new to entice me back, and then I read your e-mail, and started reading your poems, I think we are kindred spirits. Glad to find you, love your writing!
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