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too far

the sky is black, the moon can see
a boy is hanging from a tree
his life wasn't great, a total wreck
a rope is tight around his neck
his head is twisted to one side
his eyes are scared and opened wide
he tried to stop but the rope wasn't long
not enough time, he wasn't strong
on his hands it left a scar
he couldn't reach, the ground was too far

by sajinn
posted on 06/17/2008

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Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Jun 20, 2008 5:17 pm
Oh dear. Cool.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Jun 20, 2008 5:17 pm
Oh dear. Cool.
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jun 17, 2008 4:19 pm
this is a really sad poem,im sorry for the boy...and good poem,i liked it. =]
Comment by zoe: Jun 17, 2008 10:42 am
wow sad dpoem but love the flow it was awsome but i do feel sorry for the little boy great poem keep up the good workSmiley
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