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The voices

As I'm lying here....
In my bed....
The voices whisper
in my head...
Get the knife.....
get the rope....
End your life....
And end all hope...
Grab a gun...
Put it to your head...
Pull the trigger...
And soon you'll be dead...

I close my eyes...
and listen no more...
The voices wont stop,
'till they win the war...
thirteen years old and thinking of suicide...
I know there's no point...

My soul has already died

by 13YearOldAngel
posted on 12/05/2007

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Comment by pmaravelias: Dec 5, 2007 7:38 pm

cheer up life only gets worse JK no really life does suck sometimes, but it has little moments of clarity and love. I think in the end its those micro moments that make life worth living. Good first write, a bit too in your face, but keep writing. Nice work Smiley

Comment by 13YearOldAngel: Dec 5, 2007 7:45 pm

Thankyou.....

Comment by FreeFalling: Dec 5, 2007 10:12 pm

Good poem. I was 13 when I became depressed and started thinking of suicide. I know many others who started young too, so you're not alone. You did a good job for your first poem. Keep writing.

Comment by romantichomicide: Dec 5, 2007 10:27 pm

really good like it alot and your angelic soul is living free

Comment by HeartlessAngel: Dec 6, 2007 9:43 am

Amazing first poem. I was also 13 when I started to think of suicide. Just gotta hang in there. I'm here if you ever need to talk, ok?

Comment by PrayForMe: Dec 6, 2007 7:56 pm

Whoa!. Now this is a awesome poem!.
I could not have worded better myself.
Keep writing, I would love to hear more from you, Your not alone. I also became very sad at 13...
Vote up Smiley

Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 4, 2008 12:06 am

Nicely written. When i was 13 i became very depressed also, you can get through it. As hard as it seem you gotta keep your head up high. The more you mope around and feel sorry for yourself, the more negitive things you think, it makes you feel worse.
i look forward to reading your future poems

Comment by loveme77: Jan 8, 2008 4:16 pm

I'm 13 and I am depressed. I used to have suicidal thought but don't no more. It's because people have showed me that I still have a reason left to live. You do too. Great job ;)

Comment by christi823: Jan 16, 2008 8:11 am

I'm 12 and I'm used to be like, suicidal-depressed. I still have thoughts like that but not as much as I used to. I was convinced to keep hanging on and that I'll make it. No one deserves to do that to themselves.
Voting up. ^-^

Comment by MindTwister: Jan 31, 2008 4:57 pm

My depression turned into anger and thats why I fight I'm always having a laugh though, a good poem but you shouldn't be thinking of suicide when you've got so many oppurtunaties a head and your a great poet

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