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The Suicide

A Glass Figure,
A Porcelain Doll,
Sitting on a shelf;
A Shattered Window,
A Bloody Knife,
Displayed on the floor,
A Ballerina Musicbox,
A Mirror with Missing Pieces,
Sitting on a dresser;
A Little Dollhouse,
A Few Broken Dolls,
Scattered on the floor;
A Little Pink Bed,
A Blind White Stool,
Resting in the corner of the room;
A Drawing Book,
A Sleeping Gun,
Laying on the bed;
A Little Black Book,
A Candle,
Sitting on the stool;

The Musicbox played,
The Porcelain Doll stared,
The Glass Figure watched,
The Little Dollhouse and the Broken Dolls, sat there silently;
The Black Book whispered,
The Sleeping Gun wept,
The Candle sat there, Gloomily shinging as the clock ticked on and on;

The Clock kept ticking,
The Candle kept burning,
The Little Pink Bed stared at the White Stool, and the White Stool stared Blindly into Silence;

Darkness crept in,
The Silence whispered, ringing through their ears;
The Smell of Blood,
The Smell of Death,
Hanging, eerily Haunting the room;

Death clung to the air,
Blood hung to the walls, dripping, dripping to the floor;
A Puddle of Blood,
A Puddle of Death,
Pooling on the floor.

by EmoBabyGurL
posted on 05/17/2008

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Comment by oceanreverie: May 17, 2008 2:57 pm
this is interesting, i like how you tide everything together, including "things" around the room. this is very creative. nicely done
Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 17, 2008 3:35 pm
nice i like it. i havent read ne thing like it b4. i love it!
Comment by vampireheart: May 17, 2008 4:24 pm
wow,
its, wonderful
and it makes you think, if a little girl actually would commit suicide
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 17, 2008 4:58 pm
i reeally like this,how you tied it all together into one,very creative!
Comment by AshFlowers: May 18, 2008 3:45 pm
I love this.. it sounds more like a little girl got a hold of daddys gun and killed herself by accident, you know like the gun was weeping because it did something terrible, but like I said I love it.
Comment by bloodyrose: May 21, 2008 10:29 am
hey agree with ashflowers..but it is now one of my favorites!!
Comment by poetryismusic: May 23, 2008 10:15 am
This is very good...I love the descriptiveness(dont know if I spelled that right).
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