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The split second

The blade slips to the floor
The blood runs from my wrist.
I look at my body
Spread out on the floor.
I have finally did it!!!

As the seconds turn to hours
I stare in awe.
Then suddenly the door opens up,
And i find the face of my brother.
His face turns white,
As he looks at my body.
Tears swell in his eyes,
As the pictures run through his mind.

I n that split second
I think of what i have done.
Only wishing i could take it back.

by asimpledeath
posted on 03/04/2008

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Comment by meltedsnowman: Mar 4, 2008 10:03 am
WOW. amazing.great poem. u okay
?
Comment by stargirl09: Mar 4, 2008 10:05 am
i love this poem amazing!!!! finally someone who rocks!! LOL!! but are u okay!! cutting is bad
Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 4, 2008 10:09 am
great poem...love it...
Comment by Tequilla: Mar 4, 2008 10:16 am
Hmm, I like it, really good.
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 4, 2008 11:24 am
good poem......do you really cut? because i havnt been caught yet....but i do regret it every time i do it...so dont start if you do
Comment by bloodyhands13: Mar 4, 2008 11:48 am
thats a really amazing poem... i dont know you but i feel your pain =(
Comment by burdette: Mar 4, 2008 12:46 pm
kool poem
Comment by gaara: Mar 4, 2008 12:54 pm
life changing poem great job if you need someone to talk to im here Smiley
Comment by Vamous: Mar 6, 2008 2:24 am
Really strong poem! I think you have done a good job! Smiley
Comment by asimpledeath: Mar 6, 2008 9:15 am
Wow thanks for all of these great comments.Sticking tongue out
Comment by ttgoth: Mar 6, 2008 11:31 am
Very Nice
Comment by jakesteel: Mar 6, 2008 7:26 pm
deep
Comment by HeartlessShadow: Mar 14, 2008 2:26 pm
WOW that was deep.
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 13, 2008 8:58 am
That sucks for your bro
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