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The Prettiest Girl Alive

Trying to hold onto what I can't see,
I know that one day I'll look back and know why this happened,
There's a reason for everything,
And for me it is clear,
I was never meant to belong here,
So if this "disease" takes me with it,
So be it,
But I will not die now,
I need to breathe, just breathe,
For once I need to be free,
My love for you is confusing, this I know,
So if I need say one more thing before I go,
I love you my dear inner child but my time has come to leave,
I want to be thin, but don't want to die,
My dear child if tears could make one pretty,
You'd be the prettiest girl alive.

by NoMoreSorrow
posted on 08/04/2009

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Comment by SilentWords: Aug 4, 2009 11:33 am
My dear child if tears could make one pretty,
You'd be the prettiest girl alive.

I do like that last line. I find beauty in pain. Sometimes you have too..
Comment by poeticissues: Aug 4, 2009 11:02 am
oooo. I like dis one
intersting...
Comment by YoungLad: Aug 4, 2009 6:51 pm
I only like the last two lines.
Comment by controlthedemon: Aug 5, 2009 1:17 pm
Wow... I can relate to this very good!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Aug 10, 2009 12:42 pm
Awww. Those last lines ended this poem soo perfectly. Its saddening but I think its very good. Self-Accepting almost? anyways, its a lovely write. I wish you luck. :]
Comment by Bubbles2mySoda: Aug 23, 2009 11:06 pm
Wonderful, as always. Sad and painful.
Empty your mail lovely and tell me what's happening.
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