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The End You Preferred

Come with me now to that place untraveled
Where time has no meaning and sanity unravels
No one is there to hear your appeal
No need to cry, for there is nothing to feel
You have now shed the last of your tears
And answered your loved ones greatest of fears

Leave all of your worries back at the gate
Prepare for darkness, for this is your fate
No need to speak, there is nothing to say
The land of the living has now gone away
You had you chance at a wonderful life
But you had to go and play with your knife

Did you really think it was all just a game
How long before they have all forgotten your name
So take pride in the deeds that you have done
And that life from which you chose to run
So hush little baby, don't say a word
Isn't this end, the end you preferred

by grunty
posted on 09/16/2009

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Comment by trishaaa08: Sep 30, 2009 6:13 pm
awesome! i was planning to commit suicide before. but not anymore!!
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Sep 17, 2009 9:07 am
I like this. It speaks truth! People will only mourn so long and then they will forget.
Comment by Yeaku: Nov 15, 2009 11:01 am
its very good but i think its too open,ur message i mean.
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 25, 2009 9:00 am
Awesome write! I was having a really bad day, but this really made my day better! Smiley
Comment by JeNvEy: Oct 1, 2009 8:01 am
Very well written poem, really deep emotions
Comment by Julieelovesyou: Sep 16, 2009 6:00 pm
i love thiss! as Heartbroken120 said its AMAZING!! keep up the amazing work
Comment by kenMGMT: Sep 22, 2009 3:41 am
I can relate to this poem sadly, but its part of life on what we consume, making us who we are. Great Poem ! It gets pretty deep.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 16, 2009 11:53 am
It's nice to see you brought this one back. I think it deserves a permanent place on this site.
Comment by BlackbookPast: Sep 16, 2009 12:59 pm
this is good man
Comment by SilentWords: Sep 16, 2009 1:09 pm
I do agree, you should permanently place this one on this site. It’s a wonderful poem, with an excellent message. Nice to read this again!
Comment by poemwrittingpipsqueek: Sep 16, 2009 2:18 pm
wow this is a terrific poem...very true
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Sep 16, 2009 2:26 pm
You should bring back as many of your pieces as you can find.
Ugh... it is ridiculous that so many teens think about, threaten, or commit suicide. It doesn't solve anything!
Nice poem grunty. I think this MIGHT have a chance of getting through a teen's thick skull.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Sep 16, 2009 2:34 pm
Oooh, i forgot about this one. Nicely timed re-post i think!

That aside, it is a great point well made.
Comment by LostInMotion: Sep 16, 2009 3:08 pm
I love this poem so much i agree it deserves a permanent place on the site
Comment by Elizajh: Sep 16, 2009 3:39 pm
this was just....pure genius. I don't even know what else I can say...so true and it definitely deserves a permanent spot...
Comment by Heartbroken120: Sep 16, 2009 4:24 pm
this is amazing!!! loved it
Comment by kiraralee77: Sep 17, 2009 8:02 am
i remember this poem... i love this poem.. it speaks so much in such volume. great write!.
Comment by SmileEmoKid: Sep 17, 2009 8:07 am
excellent. first tiem i've read it, i love it. i'm glad you re-posted it. you make a very good point
Comment by watsmyproblem: Sep 17, 2009 10:13 am
wow ur so ryt!! thanx for there post its immense.
Comment by deathsmessanger: Sep 18, 2009 11:18 am
Awesome
Comment by animefangirl4ever: Sep 20, 2009 4:15 pm
I don't love you either! What is you problem? Although I don't hate this poem, pretty good, I like the flow.
Comment by animefangirl4ever: Sep 20, 2009 4:15 pm
And the rhyming, I lvoe that and the meaning, pretty solid poem!
Comment by deep: Sep 19, 2009 10:52 am
really
it is worth reading
full of wisdoms ..
and it gave me ideas that you are really a wise man
" we have to be patient in this life coz no one have what they want easily ..
so just let sadness down
and live our life as we like ,,
Comment by waterwitch: Sep 19, 2009 1:35 pm
beautiful work! i like it. it has rythme, passion,beauty, and of course, creativity.
how long have you been in the poetry business?
Comment by SilentBeauty: Sep 19, 2009 2:57 pm
I love this its wonderful and true all at the same time.+)
Comment by deadinside212: Sep 22, 2009 6:35 pm
this is soo true. i lovee it! keep it up
Comment by OasisInMyMind: Sep 22, 2009 7:21 pm
this has amazing flow... wow.
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Sep 23, 2009 12:39 pm
How could anyone hope to pass this off as his own? This is grunty through and through!
I still cant believe someone would try to steal someone elses poetry...I mean you're bound to get found out eventually!!!
Comment by true: Sep 23, 2009 2:23 pm
yes, this is grunty.
Comment by doomblade40: Sep 23, 2009 5:39 pm
that is really deep
Comment by nocturnus: Sep 23, 2009 5:55 pm
Once again beautiful piece of work...Evergreen
Comment by darksideofme: Sep 24, 2009 6:58 am
I know you think its bullshit.... but I'm still going to make a song out of this.
Even if it kills me!!!!
(That would surely be Ironic)
Comment by Psychobabble: Oct 3, 2009 9:20 pm
Wow, now i really like this one.
Comment by vonsweeny: Oct 5, 2009 3:12 pm
i really like this
but to respond to some people here
if somone feels that hopeless that death is there only opion they have a serious problem and its no laughin matter and not something that is ridiculous its very sad
Comment by angelofthetruth: Oct 6, 2009 1:06 pm
this is an amazing poem
Comment by wishingitwasyou: Nov 19, 2009 8:27 pm
very good, nice job
Comment by xochitlisasian: Oct 21, 2009 10:45 am
hkjhasdkjhahkah
WOOOW.
Comment by wolflover: Oct 23, 2009 2:52 pm
wow you can write really good. amazing Smiley
Comment by naty22: Oct 25, 2009 11:21 am
good poem i loved it. it gave me chills
Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Oct 26, 2009 2:55 pm
excellent
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