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the drug

walking alone
alone in the rain
i take a couple
seconds later
the world stops
spinning all around me
tripping falling
trying to talk
but all that comes out
is a scream
im numb to everything
nothing bothers me
for once i feel good
i forget all bad things
but the demons
they are following me
trying to kill me
it wears off
so i take more
and do it all over again

by cutupangelofdeath
posted on 07/02/2008

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Comment by fade: Jul 2, 2008 10:29 am
Wow, i think this is one of my favorites of yours. The wording is great.
Comment by asdfyz: Jul 2, 2008 8:51 am
hmm... this is very sad. I don't know what it's like, but this seems like a tragic description of it.

I love your poem. IT is so sad and bleak and it sets such a perfect scene. Great job.
Comment by freespirit252: Jul 2, 2008 8:09 am
Great poem.
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jul 2, 2008 4:41 am
Hmm. Good poem.
Comment by sahkms1012: Jul 2, 2008 8:18 pm
I LOVED IT!!!! it was amazing!!
Comment by ashuhhland: Jul 2, 2008 9:31 pm
i dont really know which drug you were refering to but it had to have been some type of hallucinogen...great poem
Comment by lostinpoetry: Jul 4, 2008 1:23 pm
This is great!!!
Comment by tgunz: Jul 7, 2008 7:34 am
I appreciate that your poem shows the demons are not defeated by the drug, too many cannot realize this. Good work!
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jul 18, 2008 8:40 pm
GOOD poem!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 14, 2008 2:12 pm
Great poem
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