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The Darkest Hole

Drifting away,
Away from time,
Away from pain.
Darkness engulfs her,
Needs her warmth,
Needs her lure.
Life disappears,
She feels so numb,
She feels so dumb.
In a beautiful black hole,
She waits for the ground,
For a sound.
But in this hole,
This hole of empty thoughts,
She feels nothing,
For she is lost.
And deeply drowning,
She feels alone,
Until she wakes,
With a moan.
It was all a dream,
A worthless thing,
And she'll never get out of life, it seems.
She wants to go back,
Back to the hole,
Where she's left alone,
Alone with her soul.

by squirrelluver2
posted on 04/16/2008

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Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 24, 2008 10:01 am
i love this one its very gud keep up the gud poetry your gud at it!
Comment by StillHoping: Apr 19, 2008 12:41 pm
woah thats really good (Y)Smiley
Comment by Nelliii: May 3, 2008 2:03 pm
pretty long, and usually when a poem is this long it's not as good as this one, great job!
Comment by LostInside: Apr 16, 2008 1:13 pm
very good poem, i can relate to it, vote ^
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 17, 2008 11:25 am
Vote Up!
Comment by emogothjen: Apr 17, 2008 12:27 pm
wow. i loved it. very good and i can tottally relate.
Comment by anonymous: Apr 17, 2008 7:45 pm
i like it. it's really good, i can totally relate too.
Comment by behindunseenwalls: Apr 20, 2008 9:14 pm
wow...
Comment by chazie: Apr 19, 2008 10:49 am
i loved this poem! nice work
Comment by poetoflove: Apr 20, 2008 4:54 pm
wow! great
Comment by Cloudular: Apr 22, 2008 9:19 am
It was really short, but i like the way the words flow together. Nice poem, too!
Comment by deadlyinluv24: Apr 23, 2008 10:43 am
dang! i wish i could write like that. mine r just ok but urs r wow!
Comment by asdfyz: Apr 28, 2008 3:34 pm
very very good!
Comment by AshFlowers: Apr 30, 2008 5:47 pm
I like this I wrote a poem like this but it was short. but keep up the amazing work.
Comment by brokentwice: May 2, 2008 8:58 am
I wish to reach that hole....cuz i shouldn't have been alive!!!! thnx 4 this great poem keep it up!!!
Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 7, 2008 1:11 pm
i can really relate
Comment by ashuhhland: Jul 2, 2008 9:37 pm
i too can relate to how this girl in the poem feels or how you were feeling when you wrote this. wonderful job
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