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The Beast

The beast lives in total darkness he comes in, straight out of the raging storm in the dead of all nights. He searches for his sacrifice, in the hiddous darkness he lurches for ultimate satisfaction feasting off little kids, eating there tongues, poking out there eyes, the beast breaks bones and strangles throats, he then scolds your body with his red eyes. And when he's done he hangs your body with a rope and returns to the darkness from which he came.

by xxluverofyouxx
posted on 02/28/2008

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Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Feb 28, 2008 9:49 am
damn very good poem wow ummmm the last part was pretty good to!!!
Comment by Bourne: Feb 28, 2008 9:53 am
i agree with crazy, the last part was awesome. but i think the beginning is even better just because you put "in the dead of all nights". I don't know why but that really enticed me. great jobSmiley
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Feb 28, 2008 10:58 am
yeah thats pretty good i like this kind of poems!! Love it
Comment by Poison: Feb 28, 2008 11:25 am
I love it.
Comment by sassicat: Feb 28, 2008 11:51 am
great poem, i love it!
Comment by xxluverofyouxx: Feb 28, 2008 12:42 pm
come on vote up=D
Comment by hiddeninblood: Feb 28, 2008 1:05 pm
good poem..
Comment by Pehden: Feb 28, 2008 6:12 pm
Um...wow I actually dont want to comment this but yea this sounds as wird as what i wrote.
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