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Tears Shred Skin

Fears close in,
and I'm not who I once was,
all these tears,
they don't just hurt anymore,
they're drawing blood.

Oh how I wish that you could see,
all the different ways you're hurting me.

But I'm not gone,
no, cruel life is holding on.

Lurking insanity,
why can't life,
just let go of me?

I'm only one...
Maybe if I just keep giving blood...

Your words they animate,
give razors life,
and they do preforate,
but I'm not gone..
No, cruel life torments, still holding on.

These tears shred skin,
serrated drops of salt and blood,
unstitched wounds bleeding again,
and I'm too far gone to hurt anymore.

I'm bleeding out,
maybe now you can see,
the pool of crimson,
you've drained from my being,
it's over though,
my sweet tormentor has let go.

So stand over what once was me,
view this exsanguinated husk,
once normal,
once functioning.

I'm free now,
so have no remorse,
shed no tears,
learn from my corpse,
don't allow your sorrow,
to consume,
don't let emotion kill you too.

by SinnerIndeed
posted on 05/06/2008

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Comment by LostInside: May 6, 2008 12:40 pm
wow...this great,i love this poem...wow...
Comment by lbrnware: May 6, 2008 1:40 pm
this is such an amazing poem, I absolutely love it,

you have my vote,
lbrnware
Comment by drkromance: May 6, 2008 2:30 pm
Hidden meaning in hidden words that stand out like lightnight.. Amazing poem.
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: Jun 19, 2008 8:16 am
i agree with all but most of all i agree with izzie be alot of strong emotion and true feeling.. very good very well writtenSmiley
Comment by izziebee: May 21, 2008 8:03 pm
wow! this really really deep! and very powerful! love how u portrayed ur message! and love the title! that's wat got me to read it in the first place cause it was creative. not the same old same old "pain" one's i usually see. nothing agaist those or anything cuz i'm guilty of titling one of my poems that too! ha ha! anyway fabulous job! keep writting!!!
Comment by Darryn732: May 6, 2008 9:59 am
wow this is deep Smiley I love It
Comment by kayla: May 7, 2008 8:25 am
Morbidly Great!Smiley nice job!
Comment by poemsarebliss: May 7, 2008 8:59 am
agree wid kayla there..actually agree wid everyone who've commented above...btu seriously great poem...!!
Comment by linandbet: May 7, 2008 9:30 am
this is good-it really speaks
Comment by bloodyrose: May 7, 2008 11:03 am
agre with kayla also.....i really really like this one...know the feeling
Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 7, 2008 1:02 pm
i absolutely love it. awesome poem
Comment by AngelIndeed: May 7, 2008 2:43 pm
you also know my view on this one i thank you for writing it, its like all those words i couldnt get out i love you baby
Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 8, 2008 5:21 am
dang thats good! its really deep!
Comment by asdfyz: May 8, 2008 6:55 am
that is scarily deep. grea poem
Comment by lifesucks: May 8, 2008 10:59 am
this is a really great poem it is really deep i love it
Comment by cortney: May 10, 2008 12:17 pm
its a great poem.when u think about it, its hard to emigen that ppl really feel that way at times.
Comment by clinxi: May 11, 2008 4:05 am
omg i love itttttt
Comment by ktmjamal: May 12, 2008 9:00 pm
wowwwwwwwwww
Comment by ktmjamal: May 12, 2008 9:00 pm
wowwwwwwwwww
Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 14, 2008 5:19 am
u definatly have my vote!awsome poem! its really deep!
Comment by Penny: May 19, 2008 8:05 pm
wow that was really good, really deep. kinda sad but hey whats poetry for! haha
Comment by vampireheart: May 22, 2008 6:52 am
thats deep man deep
^_^ b
Comment by Freewriter91: Jul 21, 2008 1:22 pm
deep but so beautiful
Comment by SolitaryRavenSoul: May 11, 2009 10:28 am
i find no words... but this is deeply written...
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