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Sweet little death

My sweet little death
is well planned out
its really something
I've thought hard about.
How I'll slid the blade
how hard I'll push
when to bend my wrist back
to let the blood run out.
The smell of the pain
the feel of the hate
the warmth of the blood
in this free running state.

My sweet little death
my beautiful little dream
more than just a though
more like a sceam.
People will want to stop me
say its not the way
I think its right
and I think its okay.
Please dont try to stop me
I have wanted this for ever
and when I leave this rotten world
I swear it will get better.
No more dreadful me.

I'll do it where no ones sees
as I take my last breath
I'll do as clean as possable
and enjoy my little death.

by LostInDarkness
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by prettyspl: Nov 7, 2009 2:39 am
Personally, I don't endorse poems about suicide. But .. if I just look at the 'poetry' side of this poem, I do like it. I know that sounds hypocritical but I'm just being honest. We write what we feel .. it just hurts to read about people taking their own lives. It's so selfish and sad ...
Comment by Acheron: Nov 6, 2009 1:16 pm
wow twisted but i love it!!!!
Comment by SilentWords: Nov 6, 2009 1:40 pm
and when I leave this rotten world
I swear it will get better.

How do you know that?

If this is just a poem(and not what you really want to do) then its kind of cliché..
But if its something you want to do.. then maybe you should stop and think first..maybe talk to someone, sliting your wrist is wayyyy more painful then most think.


Comment by Darkhawk: Nov 12, 2009 2:38 pm
I'm going to agree with Silent on this one, sliting or even cutting is much more painful then others make it out to be.
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