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Suicidal

The gun has a trigger, the rope has a noose.
The cuts, they get bigger as I press down harder with my blade.
The darkness comes down, as my light fades.
I enter in a world where they all go.
The ones who end their life with a touch of a blade.
The pull of a trigger, the rope around their neck.
I regret what I did.
There’s no going back.
I can’t say I’m sorry.
It’s now too late.
This is it.
This is my fate.

by Sheismyonly
posted on 11/13/2009

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Comment by BrokenSmile831: Dec 7, 2009 9:41 am
this is really good.
Comment by Judah: Nov 14, 2009 11:40 pm
very raw emotion in such a short piece. just a suggestion, possibly dig deeper into documenting these painful moments, you seem very good at it. ty
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 13, 2009 8:09 pm
wow
Comment by NaturalBeauty: Nov 14, 2009 10:59 am
really good
Comment by KillCourtney: Nov 16, 2009 5:35 pm
I really like this. Its short but good.
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