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Stone, Blood, Salt, Rust

chained up by encircling memories
heart of stone a thudding ache
all these harsh responsibilities
its more than I can take

I thought I'd conquered time
smashed the hourglass to the wall
ignored the ghost in the mirror
wiped away blood and walked tall

but the salt still remains
bitter upon my tongue
marble cheeks stained with the horrified thought
of how it could all go wrong

chains red rusted by this fury
salt sands slip in my empty head
all I do is try to help
but destroy this love instead

they say love is a cruel master
but even more so is time
how long can I last here all alone
and do I still believe you're mine

how can you save me when you're not here
how can I be strong when all I feel is fear
ghost in the mirror fights with rusty chains
as time comes to claim my bloody remains

stone, blood, salt, rust
the sands of time erase my trust.

by Selene
posted on 12/09/2008

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Comment by apavli36: Dec 20, 2008 1:42 am
great!
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Dec 31, 2008 7:09 am
This is as good as salt, blood, rust, stone.

Your good.
Comment by ArcAngel: Dec 12, 2008 11:52 am
Beautiful...
SmileySmileySmiley
Comment by DarkCobra: Dec 12, 2008 6:49 pm
Amazing,
Dark,
beautiful,
coolio,
and awesomeee
Comment by angelheart16: Dec 9, 2008 3:33 pm
wow beautiful and deep, i love this poem because you feel everything you write in tyhis poem wel i do anyway, you're an amazing poet, and through this hurt you will be strong, i kow this coz i believe in you SmileySmileySmileySmiley
Comment by fade: Dec 9, 2008 3:44 pm
Absolutely beauttiful. You have so much talent.
Comment by freespirit252: Dec 9, 2008 5:30 pm
Great poem, I agree with fade, you have a lot of talent
Comment by Cameronx: Dec 10, 2008 1:00 pm
Amazing poem. Pure talent!
Comment by christi823: Dec 10, 2008 1:15 pm
DAMNN.

Like all the others said, you got some talent!!

This is amazing!
Vote up.

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Comment by jealousara: Dec 10, 2008 2:17 pm
this is really beautiful. there is such emotion here
Comment by megsj: Dec 11, 2008 8:49 am
on the second to last stanza is the first word suppose to be they?
Comment by Brandon: Dec 11, 2008 9:15 am
This is really a great piece. I always enjoys the words that come from you. You are such a talented writer.
Comment by Selene: Dec 11, 2008 9:20 am
yeah megsj it is, thanks.
Comment by Cornflakes: Dec 11, 2008 1:04 pm
This Is Amazing...You're An Amazing Poet.
Comment by SilentMelodies: Dec 11, 2008 1:25 pm
Wow. This is perfect! Wonderful!
Comment by lonelygal: Dec 14, 2008 9:04 am
beautiful
Comment by MonsterBabies: Dec 20, 2008 1:15 am
It's okay. Keep going. It's interesting too... I like your references
Comment by BroodingChild: Dec 19, 2008 10:30 am
impressive. you have talent.
Comment by heartbrokengirl911: Dec 19, 2008 1:16 pm
deep!! i love it!
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jan 5, 2009 7:27 am
brilliant =)
Comment by rayne482: Jan 6, 2009 7:16 am
Nice poem, I love it.
Comment by Heartbroken120: Mar 23, 2009 1:22 pm
brilliant!!!
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