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Something wrong with me?

My life is such a waste
begging on something to work this time
But why can't I relate?
Feeling all I do is get what's mine
Holding on to faith, never gave me nothing but despair
So why do I create just to be swallowed?
I cannot take this place
burning up inside, this space of mine
so why can't I replace, feelings I find hard to really find?
I try but I can't taste
Memories they always come haunt me. All my feelings have been eating onto me
Feed inside, is there something wrong
with me?

by DeepDestruction
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by charlotte897: Nov 8, 2009 3:56 am
good poem i like it coz it relates to me
Comment by dyingroselost15: Nov 6, 2009 4:39 pm
lots of emotion. wonderful.
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 7, 2009 9:03 pm
wow. i. love. it! =) this is rllllllly good.
Comment by charlotte897: Nov 11, 2009 11:40 pm
very well picked words plenty of emoition good job
Comment by deathmonkey: Nov 26, 2009 6:45 pm
I like the way it's written... format-wise. It's a good poem, too Smiley
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